Holy Hands.
Watch and Pray.20 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
Aussie. Your poetry is a well balanced write in rhyme, rhythm, and message telling us to keep the faith in all our affairs. God is already ahead of us as the two of us well know. To write about the Apocalypse is to re-enforce the message. Meanwhile you earn six stars and very favourable thoughts.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Aussie. Your poetry is a well balanced write in rhyme, rhythm, and message telling us to keep the faith in all our affairs. God is already ahead of us as the two of us well know. To write about the Apocalypse is to re-enforce the message. Meanwhile you earn six stars and very favourable thoughts.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Alan, Thanks so much for reading - like minded we are. Yes, He is ahead of us and for the faithful, lets us know the dangers that we face. Blessings my friend, Kay XX
Comment from adewpearl
lifeline - I would make that one word
good internal rhyme in eyes to the skies
good alliteration in phrases like man-made, search for a sign, fear and falling, watch the weather, fear follows, Holy Hands, floods and fire
excellent use of abab rhyming
vivid detail of the catastrophes in life, which contrast effectively with the hope found in God
a most uplifting, reassuring message of faith :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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lifeline - I would make that one word
good internal rhyme in eyes to the skies
good alliteration in phrases like man-made, search for a sign, fear and falling, watch the weather, fear follows, Holy Hands, floods and fire
excellent use of abab rhyming
vivid detail of the catastrophes in life, which contrast effectively with the hope found in God
a most uplifting, reassuring message of faith :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Hello Nana, Thank you so much for reading and editing. Now is the time to lift up our hearts to the Lord. Hugs, Kay.
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is a very powerful and inspiring poem, Aussie. You use strong imagery throughout to create a sense of urgency -- and I tend to agree that we have to start acting differently in so many ways in our lives. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such a great way.
Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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This is a very powerful and inspiring poem, Aussie. You use strong imagery throughout to create a sense of urgency -- and I tend to agree that we have to start acting differently in so many ways in our lives. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such a great way.
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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Hello Bev, Thanks for reading - time is of the essence; signs are there, are we ready? Blessings, Kay.
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I try to work in my little corner of the world. You're very welcome, Kay. Hugs, Bev
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There is strength in unity my friend. :-)
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So true, Kay. :0)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is lovely Kay, something everyone should read. We are slowly destroying everything God gave us, and as you say, Satan is having a good laugh. The climate has changed, and I am not only talking about the weather, we have changed and not for the better. You have written a powerful poem here, Kay! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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This is lovely Kay, something everyone should read. We are slowly destroying everything God gave us, and as you say, Satan is having a good laugh. The climate has changed, and I am not only talking about the weather, we have changed and not for the better. You have written a powerful poem here, Kay! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
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Mrs Seagull, Thanks so much for reading - when the birds start to fly backwards, we are in trouble! Glad you picked up the thread - bless you girl! Love, Kay XXXX
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is absolutely an awesomely written and anointed poem sent right straight from Heaven above. The gift of poetry is a gift from God and He uses those he gifts to be His mouth piece and His hands extended. Oh yes we love Him with our whole heart and so glad you do too. God loves you and so do we.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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This is absolutely an awesomely written and anointed poem sent right straight from Heaven above. The gift of poetry is a gift from God and He uses those he gifts to be His mouth piece and His hands extended. Oh yes we love Him with our whole heart and so glad you do too. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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I am honoured by your review and I thank you so much. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from country ranch writer
Mankind an we know it is slowly destroying the world one piece at a time and the scientists keep messing with the atmosphere we will see more horrific storms and such. GOD LOVES YOU AND SO DO I
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Mankind an we know it is slowly destroying the world one piece at a time and the scientists keep messing with the atmosphere we will see more horrific storms and such. GOD LOVES YOU AND SO DO I
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you dear friend; we have no one to thank for the devastation except ourselves. Watch and pray, Jesus said. Blessings, Kay.
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WELCOME ANS YES ALL WE CAN DO IS PRAY AND HOPE THEY GET IT RIGHT
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Has a nice picture to accompany the poem.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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This is a nice poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Has a nice picture to accompany the poem.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you denhagan - glad you enjoyed the read. Blessings, Kay.
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You're welcome Kay,
Dennis
Comment from mumsyone
Hi Kay,
I love your poem AND your author notes. So many people don't believe that Satan exists; I wonder where they think all this evil and destruction is coming from? Certainly not from God!
I smiled when I opened this poem and saw Jesus holding the lamb, right across from you holding your little dog. Precious, both photos.
Love and hugs,
Lois
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Hi Kay,
I love your poem AND your author notes. So many people don't believe that Satan exists; I wonder where they think all this evil and destruction is coming from? Certainly not from God!
I smiled when I opened this poem and saw Jesus holding the lamb, right across from you holding your little dog. Precious, both photos.
Love and hugs,
Lois
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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G'day Lois, Thank you so much for reading; some folks just don't get it and by the time they wake up - it will be too late! Blessed be my friend - hugs and lots of love from me across the sea! :-)
Comment from TamzinWhite
I like the passion coming from you. It takes time to get into the rhythm of the poem, but isn't that just like the effort it takes to learn to listen to the Saviour? I relate to this fervour yet it is also humbly conveyed. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I like the passion coming from you. It takes time to get into the rhythm of the poem, but isn't that just like the effort it takes to learn to listen to the Saviour? I relate to this fervour yet it is also humbly conveyed. Thank you.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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I appreciate your review - without Him we are nothing. I'm pleased that you liked the poem. Blessed be, Kay.
Comment from lakeport
Holy hands, indeed that's a very heartfelt and inspirational expressed poem, very nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Holy hands, indeed that's a very heartfelt and inspirational expressed poem, very nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Hello my friend - thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed it. Blessed be, Kay.
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your welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
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Hugs back and not long until Santa will be hugging too! :-)
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thank you Aussie.Hugs!lakeport,
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:-)
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.