Start to Live Today
Why Wait? non-rhyming tercets24 total reviews
Comment from shanamave
I absoluetly love the idea of this poem, too many people waste away their lives waiting on something. And as you so eloquently put it there are "no second chances"
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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I absoluetly love the idea of this poem, too many people waste away their lives waiting on something. And as you so eloquently put it there are "no second chances"
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes Debbie this is well written why wait indeed live for today and enjoy life this is a very good message to the readers well done regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Yes Debbie this is well written why wait indeed live for today and enjoy life this is a very good message to the readers well done regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from KG Writes
dejohnsrld (Debbie) We sometimes do have a tendency to wait done't we. You have sent a lovely message and a great reminder. Life is short and unpredictable. The best thing that we can do is to enjoy all that we can. Well written and composed. A pleasure to read. KG Writes
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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dejohnsrld (Debbie) We sometimes do have a tendency to wait done't we. You have sent a lovely message and a great reminder. Life is short and unpredictable. The best thing that we can do is to enjoy all that we can. Well written and composed. A pleasure to read. KG Writes
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
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dejohnsrld (Debbie),You are most welcome for all of these reviews. I enjoyed every one. Have a pleasant evening. KG Writes
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Waiting for good luck
Perhaps win the lottery
No luck
I know somebody who lives on a fixed income and spend most of her money on the lottery and complains she can't afford groceries or medicine. I worry about this person. We must live each day to the fullest. Nobody else can make us happy. We must find happiness within ourselves.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Waiting for good luck
Perhaps win the lottery
No luck
I know somebody who lives on a fixed income and spend most of her money on the lottery and complains she can't afford groceries or medicine. I worry about this person. We must live each day to the fullest. Nobody else can make us happy. We must find happiness within ourselves.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from JW
Your well written poem brings out a good point. To many times we waste a lot of time waiting for something.
Thank for sharing this. Now it's time to get busy in the now. JW :-)
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Your well written poem brings out a good point. To many times we waste a lot of time waiting for something.
Thank for sharing this. Now it's time to get busy in the now. JW :-)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Debbie I found this poem very provocative, humorous, and enlightening and somewhat inspirational and that's if you can believe that because it had its moments. Your free verse poem was written very well in your tercets are very understanding and easy to read. Thank you for sharing these Debbie with fans, myself another readers/writers. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Debbie I found this poem very provocative, humorous, and enlightening and somewhat inspirational and that's if you can believe that because it had its moments. Your free verse poem was written very well in your tercets are very understanding and easy to read. Thank you for sharing these Debbie with fans, myself another readers/writers. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
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You are so welcome
Comment from barkingdog
I enjoyed your philosophical free verse on how people wait for things to come along to make their lives meaningful when they should be living each moment to the fullest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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I enjoyed your philosophical free verse on how people wait for things to come along to make their lives meaningful when they should be living each moment to the fullest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Nishy81
Wow....I can identify with this...so many of us wait for "the right" time, opportunity, person etc but get lost in the waiting. We need to realize that everyday is a "present" that we need to unwrap. Lovely piece...although I am more into rhyming, I could definetly make a connection with the piece.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Wow....I can identify with this...so many of us wait for "the right" time, opportunity, person etc but get lost in the waiting. We need to realize that everyday is a "present" that we need to unwrap. Lovely piece...although I am more into rhyming, I could definetly make a connection with the piece.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Matoshka
I so agree with you, and loved the message in your words. Live each day, as it is your last, remembering it is all the time we are allotted, once gone...gone. I enjoyed your words and message. Blessings
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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I so agree with you, and loved the message in your words. Live each day, as it is your last, remembering it is all the time we are allotted, once gone...gone. I enjoyed your words and message. Blessings
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from SteveY
Never was there any truer statement made that carried such profound truth than what you've expressed in this perfect jewel of advice given here.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Never was there any truer statement made that carried such profound truth than what you've expressed in this perfect jewel of advice given here.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie