Tall Tales and Short Stories
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Comment from Silent1rose
This is a nice little warm poem. I enjoyed reading it. LOL. As always you have good rhymes and your poem flows well. ~ Rose
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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This is a nice little warm poem. I enjoyed reading it. LOL. As always you have good rhymes and your poem flows well. ~ Rose
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Hi there Rose,
I'm happy you enjoyed The Beaver. Thanks for the great review.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
Awesome idea. You do craft fairs with things like this. I fool around (imagine if I ended the sentence there) with some woodworking things that I sell and gift.
I like the poem, the picture, the concept and idea. Awesome!
John
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Awesome idea. You do craft fairs with things like this. I fool around (imagine if I ended the sentence there) with some woodworking things that I sell and gift.
I like the poem, the picture, the concept and idea. Awesome!
John
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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It works. I really don't do craft fairs, but I distribute to some local shops and boutiques. Good luck with your fairs, I can see you being successful selling anything you create. I plan to 'branch' out as I can. I've always gifted my work in one way or another and now it is gifting me a little. LOl Since I don't have a book in print, yet, it gives folks a little bit of me anyway. Love , Carolyn
Comment from clbritch
This is such an adorable children's poem. While it's wording is simple, which is good for children, it is descriptive and teaches the child a bit about the beaver while being fun and entertaining. It tells the story and is fun. Well done and I love the picture.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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This is such an adorable children's poem. While it's wording is simple, which is good for children, it is descriptive and teaches the child a bit about the beaver while being fun and entertaining. It tells the story and is fun. Well done and I love the picture.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Thanks for this great review. I am so glad you enjoyed The Beaver. :-) Carolyn
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Your welcome and yes I certainly did.
Comment from country ranch writer
such a beautiful picture and poem I think the little story tells it all so beautifully written for the children and like you said great book marks
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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such a beautiful picture and poem I think the little story tells it all so beautifully written for the children and like you said great book marks
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Thanks for this great review. I am glad you enjoyed The Beaver. :-) Carolyn
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welcome
Comment from Spitfire
What a great idea for a bookmark. And this one teachers all sorts of vocabulary to make children giggle:
cut and sliced
Chopped and shredded
minced and diced
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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What a great idea for a bookmark. And this one teachers all sorts of vocabulary to make children giggle:
cut and sliced
Chopped and shredded
minced and diced
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Glad you enjoyed this one. It is a good way to publish work and make it available for little cost. Larry laminates and cuts for me. I post all kinds of poems, etc. We can all use a few extra pennies, right? And bookmarks encourage reading. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Sylvia Page
A beautiful and well written poem just right for children. It educates while it is also a well designed bookmark. Great idea for a little extra money especially during this holiday season. Great as a gift idea as well.
Cheers,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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A beautiful and well written poem just right for children. It educates while it is also a well designed bookmark. Great idea for a little extra money especially during this holiday season. Great as a gift idea as well.
Cheers,
Sylvia
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Thanks Sylvia, I am delighted you enjoyed this one. Yes we could all use the publicity and the 'extra' pennies as well, I'm sure. :-) Carolyn
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice children's poem about the beaver, written in the free verse style with good rhythm and some rhyming throughout the poem. Nice artwork.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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This is a nice children's poem about the beaver, written in the free verse style with good rhythm and some rhyming throughout the poem. Nice artwork.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful review, I am so glad you enjoyed it.
:-) Carolyn
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You're welcome Carolyn, :0)
Dennis
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is an adorable poem and the idea is great. I take care of my 90 year old mother 24/7 so I am always looking for neat ideas to do for fundraisers but then I'm no poet, that could put a snag in the project for me. God lvoes you and so do I. Janie/Evelyn
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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This is an adorable poem and the idea is great. I take care of my 90 year old mother 24/7 so I am always looking for neat ideas to do for fundraisers but then I'm no poet, that could put a snag in the project for me. God lvoes you and so do I. Janie/Evelyn
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Janie, I am delighted you like this poem. I will PM you through Evelyn and share some information that might interest you as far as fund raising goes. Love to you both. Carolyn
Comment from Firead
Now if that doesn't get the kids to read poetry, nothing will! Fantastic job on the rhythm and rhyme. Catching short words for the children to get their tongues around. And with an educational undertone. Very fun read thanks notesandmore.
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Now if that doesn't get the kids to read poetry, nothing will! Fantastic job on the rhythm and rhyme. Catching short words for the children to get their tongues around. And with an educational undertone. Very fun read thanks notesandmore.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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You are so welcome, I am happy you enjoyed The Beaver. I write as many scholastic items as I can. There is such a need. :-) Carolyn