Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

How very poignant this is, connected to the thought of your friend's death. My sincere sympathy for this loss. The aroma of the flower of her friendship will not die. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

Thanks for the review, the sympathy in the loss of my friend and the well wishes in the contest!

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

True words in this piece. Nice form and imagery abound in this sweet little poem. As I told someone earlier, heartbreak is more identifiable to us than a real love story.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

Yes that is true. Thanks for the review.

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

A beautiful poem that is presented in a lovely way. Yellow is the colour of friendship so you have captured this so well. I enjoyed this short read. All the best in the contest

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

Thank you so much.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

I so enjoy reading/writing nature poems, mystery writer;
Your well-penned nature poem is a pleasure to read;
I like the metaphor incorporated here also--
"friendships blossoms";
"like flowers";
Well stated and so very true--each requires careful nurturing.


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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

thank you!

reply by Capricorn30 on 13-Jan-2014

Sure--you're welcome!

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

my condolences to you, the metaphor of flower is strong and beautiful, this ' the flower dies " is that relationship is one that will live on in the remaining bud.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

thanks so much.