Miss Nadine's Wait
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Comment from maggieadams
I was wondering if it was fiction or truth...well written, cute and a good rhyme in fifteen words. The art is also perfect for this poem. The layout is also an addition to the impact of the poem.
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I was wondering if it was fiction or truth...well written, cute and a good rhyme in fifteen words. The art is also perfect for this poem. The layout is also an addition to the impact of the poem.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from in777wr#
I could not imagine the tension that was there. Your poem flows, and reads well. It's shocking to read about something like this. Best to you in the contest.
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I could not imagine the tension that was there. Your poem flows, and reads well. It's shocking to read about something like this. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from Leineco
LOL. . .
OMG! Not the best way
to start a life of wedded bliss!!
In fact, I am predicting
a forthwith separation!
Very funny write :-)
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LOL. . .
OMG! Not the best way
to start a life of wedded bliss!!
In fact, I am predicting
a forthwith separation!
Very funny write :-)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from MarjorieAnne
This little story poem expresses some humor and frustration with catchy rhymes and alliteration. I would change the title to "Poor excuse" and maybe change "He just" to "Truthfully he" or "Actually he".
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This little story poem expresses some humor and frustration with catchy rhymes and alliteration. I would change the title to "Poor excuse" and maybe change "He just" to "Truthfully he" or "Actually he".
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a good short poem for the writing prompt. Written in 15 words it follows the rules. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~
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This is a good short poem for the writing prompt. Written in 15 words it follows the rules. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from James Chaima Phiri
The man was not serious but rather crazy. How can you abandon your bride like that. This is a terrible story. I wish you the best in the contest.
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The man was not serious but rather crazy. How can you abandon your bride like that. This is a terrible story. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from rouskin
Interesting experience well penned. Nice contest entry
But He just forgot Their wedding. Best of luck in your contest and have a great week
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Interesting experience well penned. Nice contest entry
But He just forgot Their wedding. Best of luck in your contest and have a great week
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
That must have been terrible for the bride who was waiting, but at least he turned up, I bet that was a relief
Well done, Mary
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That must have been terrible for the bride who was waiting, but at least he turned up, I bet that was a relief
Well done, Mary
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from Connie C
Congratulations on telling a nice little story (well, maybe not so nice for the poor bride) in so few words. What a perfect picture to accompany this too. My best to you in the contest.
Connie
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Congratulations on telling a nice little story (well, maybe not so nice for the poor bride) in so few words. What a perfect picture to accompany this too. My best to you in the contest.
Connie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is clever, amusing, and a little sad at the same time. (I see you probably had trouble with the advanced editor, too.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is clever, amusing, and a little sad at the same time. (I see you probably had trouble with the advanced editor, too.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014