Comment from Carole Rosa

Excellent

Angel Face, Your heartfelt song is riddled with pain. And even after twenty two years you still feel the sorrow. I know exactly how you feel with a true similar story. Great piece of work. Carole

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thanks so much Carole for the lovely review. I like this poem above all, and glad you like it. Miss Sally

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Such a sweet and loving memory and tribute to your husband. I think your memory of him and the pain of missing him have served you well in composing this lovely work. Don

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thanks for the very nice review. I like this poem very much and so happy you do too. Miss Sally

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

What a sad story, angelface2. These lyrics were really full of emotion and I think you did a great job capturing your relationship. Nice writing.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

thanks 24 chas for the very lovely review. I do appreciate it. MIss Sally

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

This is really beautiful Sally. It is Just about the best thing you have written. This is your seven/eleven poem my dear friend and that has to be lucky. You rhyme is very good as well. GOOD JOB! Nancy

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

thanks Nancy. It is the second one of 7/7/11/7/7/11 I wrote. I like it. Thanks so much for the lovely review. Hugs Sally

reply by nancy_e_davis on 09-Feb-2014

That makes for a very smooth cadance. I really think you have something there.

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Hi, Miss Sally,
A wonderful song, my friend, with words I can identify with....when the flowers are put away, and all the friends leave, people go on with their lives...that's when I felt so alone...But it helps to know that he's not in pain anymore, and is at peace...This was well written, with well chosen words to get your message across....I think of my husband often awake, and in my dreams...I understand this poem!

Love and Hugs,
Victoria

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thanks Victoria. I think of him often. I don't dream as much as I used to about him, but sometimes he is there. Thanks for the lovely thoughts. Miss Sally

reply by mrsmajor on 09-Feb-2014

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Comment from Dom G Robles

Exceptional

I like this poem very eloquent and touching. It reminisces a a lost loved one. It is direct, simple and expresses in full
about the love she had for someone. Very well written and I have no comment,except a little doubt on the second line of the first stanza that said: "That I heard you smile and say...your love for me will last for all years....Even in a figure of speech can we say, "I heard you smile..." Otherwise, I could have rated this a solid 6. (I think "saw" for "heard," is the right word.) The flow is excellent!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

You are right Dom and as usual I missed a simple little thing like that. I will change it now. Thanks for the Lovely review. Miss Sally

Comment from Dirus

Excellent

Hi there, thank you for the good read. Keep up the good work. All looks good. All grammar is well done. I liked this part the most.
Seems like only yesterday
That I heard you smile and say
That your love for me would last for all my years.

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you so much Dirus for the lovely review. I do appreciate all your kind words. Miss Sally