On Tobacco Road
UNC vs. Duke18 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Interesting game shared in poetry. Duke goes down. Wow! The wording is good in this write holds the moment. Appreciate the info. Shalom my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Interesting game shared in poetry. Duke goes down. Wow! The wording is good in this write holds the moment. Appreciate the info. Shalom my friend.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Thanks very much, Ben. I appreciate the review.
Comment from lakeport
On Tobacco road, some one has to be the looser, I enjoyed reading the story poem, nice rhyming and flow. God bless you.Lakeport.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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On Tobacco road, some one has to be the looser, I enjoyed reading the story poem, nice rhyming and flow. God bless you.Lakeport.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, lakeport. God bless you, as well.
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your welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from Norbanus
A fine display and way to share the thrill
of giving Duke a trounce at Chapel Hill.
I check Michigan and Ohio State
Then turn off the tube (it ain't so great)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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A fine display and way to share the thrill
of giving Duke a trounce at Chapel Hill.
I check Michigan and Ohio State
Then turn off the tube (it ain't so great)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Hah! Thanks so much, Fred. Much appreciated, my friend.
Comment from vapros
Yep, I understand about rivalries, and what a high it is when your guys make a touch like this. Live it up while you can. I imagine there will be a rematch on their turf. Good, neat, composition, fine rhyme and meter. I enjoyed it.
Bill
PS - The government will plow up Tobacco Road, if they can.
Is that a hot topic in your 'hood?
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Yep, I understand about rivalries, and what a high it is when your guys make a touch like this. Live it up while you can. I imagine there will be a rematch on their turf. Good, neat, composition, fine rhyme and meter. I enjoyed it.
Bill
PS - The government will plow up Tobacco Road, if they can.
Is that a hot topic in your 'hood?
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Bill, thanks so much, my friend. Yes, sir, the rematch is in but a couple of weeks, in Durham, so they'll have their chance soon enough.
Actually, it hasn't been that hot a topic of late, but I do expect it to gather heat again if and when the economy turns and the government starts the engines again.
Comment from Tatarka2
OK, so maybe it isn't the poem with the most depth of all of yours I've read. Still, the rhyming was spot-on, and if flowed so lyrically, fast-paced and interesting to the end, even to this non-sports fan. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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OK, so maybe it isn't the poem with the most depth of all of yours I've read. Still, the rhyming was spot-on, and if flowed so lyrically, fast-paced and interesting to the end, even to this non-sports fan. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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No, it was just a celebratory jaunt, my friend, which is fun to do, too. Thanks!
Comment from padumachitta
Yo Man. You can write about anything and make it readable.
Okay, I miss basketball and baseball, I really miss baseball..I miss playing basketball, but Imiss baseball...and stocks, I don't have enough money to buy whole milk...but, I still liked the poem..padumachitta
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Yo Man. You can write about anything and make it readable.
Okay, I miss basketball and baseball, I really miss baseball..I miss playing basketball, but Imiss baseball...and stocks, I don't have enough money to buy whole milk...but, I still liked the poem..padumachitta
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, Pad. I'm not a baseball fan, except to go to Durham Bulls and UNC games, but basketball at UNC is king.
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
You gave me a nice view of a North Carolina morning this time of year. Before long, for you, the red bud, then dogwood, and crepe myrtle. Kenny
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You gave me a nice view of a North Carolina morning this time of year. Before long, for you, the red bud, then dogwood, and crepe myrtle. Kenny
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Very soon, my friend. Very soon. Thanks so much!
Comment from 24chas
Ah, yes, all is right in the world today. I think your poem did the rivalry justice, especially when it ends as this one did. Even though it was raining here, the skies are still Carolina blue.
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Ah, yes, all is right in the world today. I think your poem did the rivalry justice, especially when it ends as this one did. Even though it was raining here, the skies are still Carolina blue.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Chas!