Comment from krys123

Excellent

I love your integral, essential and melodic rhythm and rhyme
which added to the flavor and color of your poem. This in turn helped did flow very smoothly which made it easy for me to read your poem clearly. Rhymes without neither forcing, straining or laboring words. You made the fairies come to life and that is a great achievement. Thank you for posting and sharing this for others. May you have a good one always.
Alex

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Alex, your encouraging words are always a thrill for me to read. Thank you, :-) Carolyn

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Exceptional

A wonderful poem to read Carolyn. Makes you dream of wonderful fairies. The picture used is very beautiful and fits the magical message of your poem.
Very nicely done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Hi Sarah, it is good to hear from you. I am delighted you enjoyed this poem. :-) Carolyn

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

love the artwork
nice alliteration in fairies flit and trains her tots and bladder-blot
good rhyme in around/ground and more strong rhymes follow
excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
love the jobs of the tooth fairy and the potty training fairy :-)
if you really want them too - them to
A delightful poem that children are bound to enjoy :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks Brooke, I am delighted you enjoyed this one. I appreciate the edit 'too.' :-) Carolyn

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Aw, Carolyn, this is really cute. It gives a message to wee ones, too. The picture is so beautiful. The rhymes as you go along are good. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Sally, thanks for the lovely comments and I am happy you enjoyed the poem, Carolyn

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

I'm going to close my eyes real tight and see if a fairy will come to me with a cough remedy. :)

I loved your sweet, sweet children's poem! Had I a sixer left to dole out, it would certainly be yours for this creative write.

"Pee Pee fairy trains her tots to feel a little bladder blot" .... how creative! Loved "blue-berry munches and honey-suckle lunches ... terrific imagery and rhyming with that.

I think any child would be delighted to have this read to them.

Terrific job, Carolyn!

Connie :)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks Connie for such a wonderful review of this one. I am happy you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn

Comment from AprilShower

Exceptional

I love this poem, Carolyn. It takes me back to my childhood. It flows nicely and even has rhyme. I enjoyed reading this. I think children would enjoy this poem.

April

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Hi April, I am glad you enjoyed this one, hopefully children will enjoy it. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn.
This is such a sweet poem for children. I really enjoyed how you showed not only the tooth fairy, but the "pee pee" fairy. This is great and something kids can relate to perfectly. You captured so nicely the magic of fairies. Well done.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks Rosalyne, for this great review. I am glad you enjoyed it, :-) Carolyn

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

never heard of the pee pee fairy. . .maybe I should have read up on him/her?

curious about the decision to repeat this line: they're every where

overall, a good read

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

I think the pee-pee fairy just got her job descrition with the writing of this poem. LOL Repeated line was for double emphasis. Thank you for reading and commenting.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful and delightful poem from the author in this piece of writing. I love the sentiments written about here and there is a magical experience to ut all

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks Tom, it was fun to write, glad you found it enjoyable.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 27-Feb-2014

My pleasure

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

This is a very cute and fun to read poem. i love fairies. I When I was a child I thought that hummingbirds were really fairies. Thanks for sharing a very enjoyable poem,

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

The hummingbird is probably the closest thing to them our human eye will ever see, as fairies are a part of our inner child's imagination. I am delighted you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn

reply by Cajungirl on 27-Feb-2014

As long as we can still believe and enjoy things like fairies, we will always remain young at heart.