senryu pickles
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Comment from TAB_that's me
ha ha this was funny. Great 5-7-5 poem written with the perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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ha ha this was funny. Great 5-7-5 poem written with the perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi Teresa, thanks for the kind words!
Comment from Leineco
OMG! I hope it was at least sweet gherkins! Maybe a few raisins thrown in, and a smattering of walnuts, too - LOL
I'll say this - you have definitely addressed the human condition: Curiosity still reigns :-)
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OMG! I hope it was at least sweet gherkins! Maybe a few raisins thrown in, and a smattering of walnuts, too - LOL
I'll say this - you have definitely addressed the human condition: Curiosity still reigns :-)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
Comment from Kipper Heyring
I'm not sure where the humor comes in but the number of syllables fits and the meaning is clear. The picture is appropriate. I would prefer to see two full stops to separate the three sentences.
Kipper Heyring
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I'm not sure where the humor comes in but the number of syllables fits and the meaning is clear. The picture is appropriate. I would prefer to see two full stops to separate the three sentences.
Kipper Heyring
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
Emma like pickles
I was rolling out pie crust
we made pickle pie
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is spot on. Good alliteration with pickle/pie. Clear message that is short, simple and filled with humor.
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Emma like pickles
I was rolling out pie crust
we made pickle pie
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is spot on. Good alliteration with pickle/pie. Clear message that is short, simple and filled with humor.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Pickle pie, huh? H-m-m--m-m-m-m..., I never thought of that, sounds pretty good! See, I hate to cook, but now, I am going to go make one--right this second!
Reading truly is inspirational.
Thanks...
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Pickle pie, huh? H-m-m--m-m-m-m..., I never thought of that, sounds pretty good! See, I hate to cook, but now, I am going to go make one--right this second!
Reading truly is inspirational.
Thanks...
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Pickle pie...oh me oh my..
That is so cool....were they sweet or dill?
You could leave dill on sill to cool.....we'd drool
Well done.what ..ice cream did you eat with it? Just wondering
God bless
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Pickle pie...oh me oh my..
That is so cool....were they sweet or dill?
You could leave dill on sill to cool.....we'd drool
Well done.what ..ice cream did you eat with it? Just wondering
God bless
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
Comment from DonandVicki
Good senru construction, I try to imagine what pickle pie would taste like and I get this horrible taste in my mouth, good suggestibility using your words. Don
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Good senru construction, I try to imagine what pickle pie would taste like and I get this horrible taste in my mouth, good suggestibility using your words. Don
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
Comment from James Dooney
Wow ! these look nice and the poem is great too ! I might juswt have to try them sometime ! Well done and keep going with the good work !
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Wow ! these look nice and the poem is great too ! I might juswt have to try them sometime ! Well done and keep going with the good work !
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2014