Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Cross My Heart And Hope To Die"The clue is in the title!
19 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Best one of these that I've seen.
It is funny and witty and cute and has a wonderful ending. It should do very well in the contest and may have scared me off entering!
Good luck
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Best one of these that I've seen.
It is funny and witty and cute and has a wonderful ending. It should do very well in the contest and may have scared me off entering!
Good luck
Steve
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Hi Steve :) Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, good luck wishes and of course the special 6 star rating! I appreciate all 3!! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
H-m-m-m-mmmmmmmmmm ... Well, she certainly sounds very nice. However, in the circles I run in, compulsive lying is viewed as a bad habit, and one heck of a nuisance, too! Maybe I'm being too judgmental, maybe not. All the green in this post reminds me of a serpent...UGH!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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H-m-m-m-mmmmmmmmmm ... Well, she certainly sounds very nice. However, in the circles I run in, compulsive lying is viewed as a bad habit, and one heck of a nuisance, too! Maybe I'm being too judgmental, maybe not. All the green in this post reminds me of a serpent...UGH!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Hi Dean, thank you for your wonderful feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! She does look a little untrustworthy and snake like doesn't she?! Kindest regards...:)
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You are welcome, anytime!
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abab rhyming in the first stanza and couplet rhyming in the second, in good Rispetto format
great alliteration and strong verbs in smoke or swear or slurp - good comedy too
A very witty second stanza :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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solid use of abab rhyming in the first stanza and couplet rhyming in the second, in good Rispetto format
great alliteration and strong verbs in smoke or swear or slurp - good comedy too
A very witty second stanza :-) Brooke
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke :) Thank you for your wonderful feedback :) Glad you enjoyed my Rispetto! Kindest regards as always...:)
Comment from S.Yocom
I love this rispetto, Anonymous Writer. Your meter and rhyme scheme are spot on for a riepetto, and the humor at the end gave me a big smile. Good luck in the contest.
Sally
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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I love this rispetto, Anonymous Writer. Your meter and rhyme scheme are spot on for a riepetto, and the humor at the end gave me a big smile. Good luck in the contest.
Sally
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Hi Sally :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from sai7
Short and sweetly expressed that the poet does not have a bad habit.The poet honestly expresses that she is free from bad habits and admits she is a lady with good habits only.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Short and sweetly expressed that the poet does not have a bad habit.The poet honestly expresses that she is free from bad habits and admits she is a lady with good habits only.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Hi :) The poet was also being a little sarcastic! Thank you for your comments :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Nosha17
I liked your whimsical poem about bad habits and I believe you when you said you are a lady. You have made good use of rhyme and language and it had a nice rhythm. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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I liked your whimsical poem about bad habits and I believe you when you said you are a lady. You have made good use of rhyme and language and it had a nice rhythm. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Hi Faye :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Cindy Warren
This lady wouldn't be much fun, would she? And of course dhe'd never, never fib, but might she exagerate just a little? This was a fun read; gave me a smile. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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This lady wouldn't be much fun, would she? And of course dhe'd never, never fib, but might she exagerate just a little? This was a fun read; gave me a smile. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Hi Cindy :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Chocolate Chip
This is what I needed to raise my spirits! I enjoyed reading this poem and your wording was just the right touch. The title is perfect to get someone's attention, as it did me. Overall, great job!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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This is what I needed to raise my spirits! I enjoyed reading this poem and your wording was just the right touch. The title is perfect to get someone's attention, as it did me. Overall, great job!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Thank you Chocolate Chip for your lovely comments. It makes me happy to know I lifted your spirits - the ultimate compliment! Thank you. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from seaglass
Ha ha ha. This has been my line for years though it's been challenged more than once. The color scheme and picture are so pretty and feminine. It draws the reader into the voice of a very proper lady. I love the smooth thyme of every-other-line. The last two lines are the clincher, of course she doesn't lie.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Ha ha ha. This has been my line for years though it's been challenged more than once. The color scheme and picture are so pretty and feminine. It draws the reader into the voice of a very proper lady. I love the smooth thyme of every-other-line. The last two lines are the clincher, of course she doesn't lie.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014
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Hi seaglass :) Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed my little poem, thank you for letting me know what worked well for you, I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)