Love Is . . .
a 5-7-5 love poem14 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
Very descriptive and well written. The words paint a delightful picture/. This is a fine contest entry and it is presented very well. Good job
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Very descriptive and well written. The words paint a delightful picture/. This is a fine contest entry and it is presented very well. Good job
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your very kind praise.
Comment from judester
Such a beautiful description of that magic moment. Doesn't happen often, but when it does, we suddenly understand the power of love. Sweet, Judester
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Such a beautiful description of that magic moment. Doesn't happen often, but when it does, we suddenly understand the power of love. Sweet, Judester
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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I am very pleased you understand my intent so perfectly. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from rouskin
Like a beautiful butterfly, let it land somewhere.Excellent artwork and memorable entry I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Like a beautiful butterfly, let it land somewhere.Excellent artwork and memorable entry I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Rouskin, for sharing my poem and your blessings.
Comment from crystal brandon
hi my name is crystal Brandon.i really enjoyed readiny your 5-7-5 love poem,.i loved and liked your love poem,.your poem was so beautiful it made me smile and happy as I read it,.i hope I get good as you are about writing love poems,.i wrote one on my profile crystal Brandon/fanstory called true loves first kiss please read it and tell me what u think,.i give you two thumbs up and five stars,.thanks for making me smile,.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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hi my name is crystal Brandon.i really enjoyed readiny your 5-7-5 love poem,.i loved and liked your love poem,.your poem was so beautiful it made me smile and happy as I read it,.i hope I get good as you are about writing love poems,.i wrote one on my profile crystal Brandon/fanstory called true loves first kiss please read it and tell me what u think,.i give you two thumbs up and five stars,.thanks for making me smile,.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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I could not be more pleased that my poem made you smile, crystal. Thank you for sharing my poem.
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I would love too meet you in person ome day and work with you.please check out my stories and my poems on my profile page at fanstory and tell me what you think,.the first one is an love poem called true loves first kiss and the other poem is 5 7 5 poem called longlost princess of Scotland,.
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We live far apart, but I did check out your profile and read your poem. What you need to do now, crystal, is read lots and lots of poetry and when you find some you REALLY like, try to imitate them. This is how artists learn how to paint. I learned to write prose by reading and emulating John Steinbeck. Good luck to you. Rod