Frozen Dream Song
Biographical Song-Lyrics18 total reviews
Comment from JudyS
Anupam, Wow, this is amazing! Thank you so much for adding the link to the movie soundtrack. I hadn't heard it. You are so right, listening to that first adds so much to your wonderful poem. But honestly, even without having heard the song, this would still be an awesome poem. Super job on this one. Have a good one, Judy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Anupam, Wow, this is amazing! Thank you so much for adding the link to the movie soundtrack. I hadn't heard it. You are so right, listening to that first adds so much to your wonderful poem. But honestly, even without having heard the song, this would still be an awesome poem. Super job on this one. Have a good one, Judy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback and glowing stars. Glad you enjoyed this one. That song is really inspirational.
Have a great day! :)
Comment from Lothlorien
I was reading this and I started playing it to "Let it go" in my head even before I realized that it was supposed to be like that. I really like the poem, it goes with the tune well.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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I was reading this and I started playing it to "Let it go" in my head even before I realized that it was supposed to be like that. I really like the poem, it goes with the tune well.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review. :)
Comment from adewpearl
strong verb choices like engulf/choke add drama/emotional intensity to your poem
dread/darkness/dreams/dead - good alliterative grouping
effective rise/shine chorus
I love the positivity of your poem/song :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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strong verb choices like engulf/choke add drama/emotional intensity to your poem
dread/darkness/dreams/dead - good alliterative grouping
effective rise/shine chorus
I love the positivity of your poem/song :-) Brooke
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review. :)
Comment from Glasstruth
Very positive. Has an excellent flow. No awkwardness, as the message resonates loud and clear. Really like the chorus, which seems to pick up the tempo. Nice coda at the end. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Very positive. Has an excellent flow. No awkwardness, as the message resonates loud and clear. Really like the chorus, which seems to pick up the tempo. Nice coda at the end. Well done! Les
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review. :)
Comment from ravenblack
Perfection or the quest for it freezes us. I would go as far to say that the quest for perfection is really a version of the fear of failure, leaving us frozen in a version of self that we can never hope to achieve. Congratulations on thawing out and making the commitment to live for something more attainable- happiness. Excellent song.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Perfection or the quest for it freezes us. I would go as far to say that the quest for perfection is really a version of the fear of failure, leaving us frozen in a version of self that we can never hope to achieve. Congratulations on thawing out and making the commitment to live for something more attainable- happiness. Excellent song.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I had to give this a six, my first of the week. This is an amazing adaptation to the music of the movie. I am on the road as we speak and no proper access to the video. When I have time, tune into my heart, I will be singing along with you.
Wonderfully written, :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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I had to give this a six, my first of the week. This is an amazing adaptation to the music of the movie. I am on the road as we speak and no proper access to the video. When I have time, tune into my heart, I will be singing along with you.
Wonderfully written, :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Wow! Thank you so much for this lovely review and generous rating as you haven't heard the song yet. I'm sure you will just love it. Do remember to check it out. It will be very relaxing when you feel tired after the journey.
Enjoy the day! :)
Comment from Jay Squires
I like this poem as a stand-alone one, perhaps as a song, with the bridge repeating. I haven't seen the movie or (believe it or not) heard the song. Now I suppose I shall have to. LOL.
Your poem does a beautiful job by itself, Anupam! Only one line troubles me -- and that only because it reminds me of another song: "Once I was lost" brings me to "the similar line in "Amazing Grace". Only for a moment does it draw me away from your poem. Then I come back.
A good and wholesome poem!
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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I like this poem as a stand-alone one, perhaps as a song, with the bridge repeating. I haven't seen the movie or (believe it or not) heard the song. Now I suppose I shall have to. LOL.
Your poem does a beautiful job by itself, Anupam! Only one line troubles me -- and that only because it reminds me of another song: "Once I was lost" brings me to "the similar line in "Amazing Grace". Only for a moment does it draw me away from your poem. Then I come back.
A good and wholesome poem!
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this positive review, Jay. I would suggest you to surely check it out and there is no chance of you disliking it. Now, you believe it or not--I haven't about "Amazing Grace". I don't listen much to the Western music.
Enjoy the day! :)
Comment from JavaJunkie
Love this line full of promise and hope: My dreams will never be found dead. And I also like your use of repetition, I thought it made your message stand out strong and clear. There is lots of beautiful imagery in your lines.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Love this line full of promise and hope: My dreams will never be found dead. And I also like your use of repetition, I thought it made your message stand out strong and clear. There is lots of beautiful imagery in your lines.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.