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Happy Funday

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Comment from Green Lake Girl
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Okay, so which one of your lusty wenches is sitting under the desk?? Where in the world did you find this photo? Perhaps from your High School days? The vintage phone puts it in about the same time frame. :D

Seriously, a witty little ditty you've penned here. As always, highly entertaining.

Missed you. Glad you're back. We need someone to stir the proverbial pot!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
    I don't know her name, GLG, but she's a redhead. That's all I can see. ;)

    Thanks so much! I plan to go back to some pot-stirring, too. I've missed it, and you all, as well. Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Hi, Marillion, I have been hearing soooo much about you from my many friends on here, they all love you! So, I decided it was time to get to know you myself. You didn't disappoint, you are everything they say! LOL. This is a well constructed, well rhymed poem, swings along happily and was a...funny read. I will be watching out for more. :) Sandra xsx

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Hi Sandra! Thanks so much for stopping by. Sorry that your first encounter with the rogue was a quickie, but there will be more. ;)

    Nice to meet you, and thank you for your kind words!

    David
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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Well there you are, you naughty boy. I was wondering where you had disappeared to, it's so easy to just come and go around here. I've been doing it for years, but glad you poked ;) in for a bit. Hey!!!! Where's MY LOVE SONNET!!!!!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    The real world intervened, my friend, so sorry about that. By the way, I have a completed love sonnet for you, but it's marinating right now. I'm not 100% satisfied with it, but it's close. Thanks!
Comment from closetpoetjester
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Promises, promises Your Nearness. Nice to know it hasn't shrivelled up yet. And here we were thinking you and your permanent pleasure stick had gone walkies...

Mmmm, maybe you've found riper pastures and hornier henhouses.
Me thinks, yes.
Whatever the case you've still got a little bit of rhythm left for your bitches.
I did however notice you didn't have much length today...
Problem? LMAO

Okay...I concede a hint or tiniest fraction of sixual attention from the ever generous Closet.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    All the parts are in working order, m'lady, and ready for use...and they all appreciate the sixual attention you give like no other. Many thanks, P. I've missed you, my friend.

    D
reply by closetpoetjester on 29-Apr-2014
    Good to hear.
    Pity I can't give "that" part a work out...hmmm...maybe a work "in"???

Comment from DR DIP
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Marillion, this is an interesting post and being a relative new comer I am sort of out of the loop so to speak..i am trying to understand the gist of this like is this guy a chronic masturbator or something? his he pulling himself over poetry/ has he shaved his back and arse crack? all these questions need answers!! lol

thanks for posting and hope youi reach the orgasmic high you so want to achieve haha

dip

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Thanks so much, DR DIP, for the amusing and excellent review. I have an alter ego of sorts, The Rogue, who writes suggestive and chauvinistic poetry to some of the ladies here, and they usually issue ripostes to take him down a notch or two. It's a great writing exercise for all of us, and it's all in good fun. Thanks, and welcome.
Comment from Sanku
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Well i think this is a backlash poem ,one of a series and you have been away for some time and now you ae back .Anyway ,as a poem it is funny with loads of nuances and warning that the rogue is very much alive and can strike at any time .Good alliterations and internal rhymes and the final stanza is the best.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Thank you very much, Sanku. You're exactly right. It's been awhile, so this was my returning shot.
Comment from Hadria
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A saucy piece, Sir! It reminds me of those wonderful records that were around way back in Old God's time called "When dalliance was in flower, and maidens lost their heads."Great use of double entendre, tremendous rhythm and the whole thing bounces along at a great rate. Gave a me a really good start to my day. Hadria

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Thanks so much, Hadria, for that sixer, my friend, and for your good sense of humoring realizing this is all in good fun. I appreciate it! David
Comment from Just2Write
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Oh my goodness, David - don't tell me that your member got stuck in the slats of the chair-back again. A bit of Vaseline will help to dislodge it. Nice butt shot though.
Obviously not a selfie. Perhaps one of the bitches caught you at your play?

I was growing concerned that you had kicked the bucket or something - such is the life in cyber-space. One never knows when someone is just checked out for awhile or checked out permanently. I'm still wondering what happened to Judian James.

Great fun romp with the Rogue again, and it's not even Friday. Lot's to like in this very 'Rogue-ish' poem - no need to talk about meter and flow - it's flawless.

Rose

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    You know the Rogue, Rose, he'll stick in anywhere. ;)

    Thanks so much. I don't know how regular I'll be, but i don't want to just drop off the face of the earth. Life is pretty busy right now, and my time is short...unlike the rogue's best asset. ;) Good to hear from you.

    D
reply by Just2Write on 29-Apr-2014
    I hope to see you again (clothed) soon.
    I am considering a little respite myself.
    Life does seem to take over every now and again. As to the rogue - well, keep him coming.
    R.
Comment from Gloria ....
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DAVID! Why didn't you tell me you were posing for the Poet's Society Calendar!! I'd recognize that backside anywhere. Ha.

One of the bitches is present and accounted for. I was gonna give ya the silent treatment on account of because you just vanished then I thought oh well, what the hell. Easy come, easy go, right?

If this is a quickie I can't wait until you actually produce a lengthy work -- poem that is. Great to see you're back man, quite literally.

Yours for ever and always,

The bitch. :)

PS: If anyone agrees with that assertion, I'll punch their lights out. :) In the nicest possible way of course. ;-)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    My dear, Gloria, I wanted to surprise you. :) I wouldn't have blamed you for holding out on me, but figured you'd succumb to the Rogue's surprise visit...or I was hoping so.

    Yes, just a Monday quickie to get myself back up to speed. We'll see how often I post now, but I doubt it'll be daily. Thank you.
Comment from rouskin
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Welcome back! Congratulations for this great photo session :):) As always ready for fight, fit for fight, willing to fight:
But little do they know
That every clash, attack and gash
Enables him to grow

The whole thing was a breath of fresh air. Thank you very much.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much, rouskin. It was fun to get back in the saddle again, so to speak, and I'm glad you like my latest photo sesh. ;) I appreciate the review.