The Bard of Bel Air
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well done! So Lincoln knows about the faked death, but does not know where they have him. Isabel is downstairs now... maybe she knows something.
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Well done! So Lincoln knows about the faked death, but does not know where they have him. Isabel is downstairs now... maybe she knows something.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Wow!!! I admit I miss the Bard, but Lucy is turning out to be one awesomr gal. You favor women almost exclusively as the heros of your stories. I love that. This further expands and develops Lucy which is great. The more developed characters the better the interactions. This is your best stoty and I loved your other onrs!!!NG
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Wow!!! I admit I miss the Bard, but Lucy is turning out to be one awesomr gal. You favor women almost exclusively as the heros of your stories. I love that. This further expands and develops Lucy which is great. The more developed characters the better the interactions. This is your best stoty and I loved your other onrs!!!NG
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Quite a few revelations in this chapter. The plot does go deeper than anyone first imagined. Lucy now knows the truth, but what can she do with it? Her own Captain is in on it. Another great posting.
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Quite a few revelations in this chapter. The plot does go deeper than anyone first imagined. Lucy now knows the truth, but what can she do with it? Her own Captain is in on it. Another great posting.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2014