The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Lawyers, Headlines, Ungrateful Kids!"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
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Comment from Michaelk
One has to wonder who the five men and one woman were that winston would protect them. Maybe they were dealing arms back then and he was just protecting his business partners. I loved the newspaper articles, and especially the statement that the media can't be trusted. (So true) Another good chapter.
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One has to wonder who the five men and one woman were that winston would protect them. Maybe they were dealing arms back then and he was just protecting his business partners. I loved the newspaper articles, and especially the statement that the media can't be trusted. (So true) Another good chapter.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
It is amazing how people can crawl out of the closet and come up with the weirdest stories when there is money involved. Another great chapter.
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It is amazing how people can crawl out of the closet and come up with the weirdest stories when there is money involved. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
You had a big time sense of hum or in this one. I t had me giggling. You do listen, I believe I mentioned once about maybe a body being in the celler, the deceased maid in the new fireplace basement. Good idea ... that Butler is singing like a bird. This was exceptional. You must be behind. I waited. You need to check out Word Girl's poem. Hers is a battleship, it blows everything out of the water. I think it's a winner by a large margin. smooth Lion King. count your doubloons, it's all I got.
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You had a big time sense of hum or in this one. I t had me giggling. You do listen, I believe I mentioned once about maybe a body being in the celler, the deceased maid in the new fireplace basement. Good idea ... that Butler is singing like a bird. This was exceptional. You must be behind. I waited. You need to check out Word Girl's poem. Hers is a battleship, it blows everything out of the water. I think it's a winner by a large margin. smooth Lion King. count your doubloons, it's all I got.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Working on another one. I love her poem. She wants me to enter that contest too. Hahaha. I don't want to compete against her. Doesn't she realize what that will do to our buddy Wackydo? Hahaha. I'll just stick to playing it and she can write the poem this time! mikey
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I'm afraid to enter it. I know I can't beat hers anyways. That would put me in a pickle. I see your point. You are good at music. Go with your heart. Take her up on it. Who solves my riddle will get me vote? That will be fair. how about it?
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! I thought Junior was the bad guy, but it looks like Winston is worse. Can't wait to see what his dad has to say to him! And those other men and women claiming to be Harpster's children are wasting their time with DNA testing avaliable now.
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Wow! I thought Junior was the bad guy, but it looks like Winston is worse. Can't wait to see what his dad has to say to him! And those other men and women claiming to be Harpster's children are wasting their time with DNA testing avaliable now.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2014