Where I am Found
Discovering what my home means to me25 total reviews
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I liked the honesty in this poem as in the Betsie ann prefers pizza and so do I, me to, this is a lovely poem, your home is your castle and it really shined through, good luck ,
Andrew
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I liked the honesty in this poem as in the Betsie ann prefers pizza and so do I, me to, this is a lovely poem, your home is your castle and it really shined through, good luck ,
Andrew
Comment Written 03-May-2014
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written reflective poem, we don't always think of our homes in other than its a very comfortable, warm, familiar, place of escape! I think you'll do well in this competition, you have sown into the narrative all the right adjectives, all thenwarmth that is needed to provide a convincing story! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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A beautifully written reflective poem, we don't always think of our homes in other than its a very comfortable, warm, familiar, place of escape! I think you'll do well in this competition, you have sown into the narrative all the right adjectives, all thenwarmth that is needed to provide a convincing story! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 03-May-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Loanna
Beautifully said about your home. The picture of the front door speaks of welcome, come on in and sit a spell.
Simple but very effective. Good luck with the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Hi Loanna
Beautifully said about your home. The picture of the front door speaks of welcome, come on in and sit a spell.
Simple but very effective. Good luck with the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from ravenblack
It sounds like you have downsized and landed on your feet in a place that is completely your own and cozy. But peanut butter and caviar? On one sandwich? Seriously though, I thought my grandfather was nuts when he suggested it, but try peanut butter and pickle relish.
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It sounds like you have downsized and landed on your feet in a place that is completely your own and cozy. But peanut butter and caviar? On one sandwich? Seriously though, I thought my grandfather was nuts when he suggested it, but try peanut butter and pickle relish.
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from Njorgensen
Very positive and real peek into your mind - you feeling about your home. It's true a person's home is her refuge. You've described yours very well.
Njorgensen
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Very positive and real peek into your mind - you feeling about your home. It's true a person's home is her refuge. You've described yours very well.
Njorgensen
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from krys123
LoannaLois, First of all rather wish you good luck in the prompt contest. I found your poem to be written excellently And describes your home most elegantly. A home small enough in the way you like it was less problems. It feels very homey in a great place for one would like to visit and Chat a spell.
Thank you for sharing them posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
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LoannaLois, First of all rather wish you good luck in the prompt contest. I found your poem to be written excellently And describes your home most elegantly. A home small enough in the way you like it was less problems. It feels very homey in a great place for one would like to visit and Chat a spell.
Thank you for sharing them posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from Joy Graham
I like the picture of the door. Very welcoming to your home. I love the wreath with lemons. Sparks an idea. Gave me the thought, when life throws you lemons, make a wreath for the door. LOL! I'm certain I have a huge collection of lemons thrown at me.
I enjoyed your description of your small and cozy home. Love that your dog prefers pizza over caviar.
Best wishes to you in this contest :)
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I like the picture of the door. Very welcoming to your home. I love the wreath with lemons. Sparks an idea. Gave me the thought, when life throws you lemons, make a wreath for the door. LOL! I'm certain I have a huge collection of lemons thrown at me.
I enjoyed your description of your small and cozy home. Love that your dog prefers pizza over caviar.
Best wishes to you in this contest :)
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Is this your door? Your home? because I am going to show my husband as I want to paint our front door black..I love your poem I love the comfortable welcoming -ness of it.
God bless
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Is this your door? Your home? because I am going to show my husband as I want to paint our front door black..I love your poem I love the comfortable welcoming -ness of it.
God bless
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good description of the writer's home that allow me to feel the emotion within the words. To me, this is a personal piece which invites all readers into the writers home and heart. I enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Good description of the writer's home that allow me to feel the emotion within the words. To me, this is a personal piece which invites all readers into the writers home and heart. I enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a good job of showing why having a home is important. I would have liked a little tighter format. Perhaps see if you count syllables if you can keep each line at the same syllable count (or close to it). It adds strong structure. But overall, well done.
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I thought you did a good job of showing why having a home is important. I would have liked a little tighter format. Perhaps see if you count syllables if you can keep each line at the same syllable count (or close to it). It adds strong structure. But overall, well done.
Comment Written 02-May-2014