The Bard of Bel Air
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Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. The Bard and Harpster seems to be safe for now. They are an usual duo. This seems to work for them. Let's hope the lady deceives can keep them safe. Great work.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I love the story. The Bard and Harpster seems to be safe for now. They are an usual duo. This seems to work for them. Let's hope the lady deceives can keep them safe. Great work.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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So, pleased you are enjoying this. It is a lot of fun to let the Bard say anything he wants! It's funny, because everything now is based on no one knowing what is really going on. Thank you. I'm way behind, so I'm going backwards. I do read every one of these and appreciate them very much!! mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Some incredible Bard dialogue. His stream of consciousness rambling is beyond funny. His relationship with harpster becomes more clear. Harpster likes talent. That elevates both characters without saying anything about them. Grear to see you are getting everyone nearby. NG
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Some incredible Bard dialogue. His stream of consciousness rambling is beyond funny. His relationship with harpster becomes more clear. Harpster likes talent. That elevates both characters without saying anything about them. Grear to see you are getting everyone nearby. NG
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you. That is what I try to do above story and plot, make characters that people care about. Yep, trying to get everyone closer together. Hahaha. mikey
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Yep, I been U A. I'm getting my second wind. Been missing in action but I'm back. So, the Bard can sing some Zeppelin, groovy. So, Winston thinks Senior is dead. What a juggernaught, Senior Blackwell knows about Ruby dancer, first blood heir. H eis anxious to greet them, it seems. It is all coming together, Sir Mikey. Patience is a virtue. Sorry, for me tardiness. I been busy as a bee. Lancaster, is that where you are from? Hey, Chico, I digged your Macaw in your non-fiction poem. I get a chuckle about the birds. LOL! Later Lion KIng. Live long and prosper! wackydo
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Yep, I been U A. I'm getting my second wind. Been missing in action but I'm back. So, the Bard can sing some Zeppelin, groovy. So, Winston thinks Senior is dead. What a juggernaught, Senior Blackwell knows about Ruby dancer, first blood heir. H eis anxious to greet them, it seems. It is all coming together, Sir Mikey. Patience is a virtue. Sorry, for me tardiness. I been busy as a bee. Lancaster, is that where you are from? Hey, Chico, I digged your Macaw in your non-fiction poem. I get a chuckle about the birds. LOL! Later Lion KIng. Live long and prosper! wackydo
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Comment Written 04-May-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
your mind is in overdrive my friend and seems to be rolling full speed ahead so go for it I am right behind you in reviewing
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your mind is in overdrive my friend and seems to be rolling full speed ahead so go for it I am right behind you in reviewing
Comment Written 04-May-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Nicely done. If I were Harpster, since the cops were involved, I'd go to the press and announce I'm alive, tell my story and get Winston put in jail for a few decades. But the characters in all such stories/movies NEVER think of this obvious solution, since, if they did, there wouldn't be a story. :)
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Nicely done. If I were Harpster, since the cops were involved, I'd go to the press and announce I'm alive, tell my story and get Winston put in jail for a few decades. But the characters in all such stories/movies NEVER think of this obvious solution, since, if they did, there wouldn't be a story. :)
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Comment Written 04-May-2014