The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Lincoln Surprises & Plans Are Made"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
That is toning it down a bit, I think you needed to do that. You have a very big cast of characters hard to keep track of them. Nice going, Mike. Nancy
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That is toning it down a bit, I think you needed to do that. You have a very big cast of characters hard to keep track of them. Nice going, Mike. Nancy
Comment Written 09-May-2014
Comment from CR Delport
At the end of the previous posting, I thought Lincoln was done for. Lucky he got through his chat with Winston ok. Q came up with a good plan. Another great chapter.
Lucy threw a little Southern accent on the end of her remark. She gave a little wink to Ruby, who smiled. --- two "little's" in quick succession and both are unnecessary.
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At the end of the previous posting, I thought Lincoln was done for. Lucky he got through his chat with Winston ok. Q came up with a good plan. Another great chapter.
Lucy threw a little Southern accent on the end of her remark. She gave a little wink to Ruby, who smiled. --- two "little's" in quick succession and both are unnecessary.
Comment Written 09-May-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I love the plan. It will make Winston feel safe and he'll relax, get careless, and BLAM! They got him. Nice chapter. They all are in this cool story. :)
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I love the plan. It will make Winston feel safe and he'll relax, get careless, and BLAM! They got him. Nice chapter. They all are in this cool story. :)
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Comment Written 09-May-2014
Comment from Michaelk
Well, I thought Lincoln was going to be lawn fertilizer, but he handled himself okay. It was interesting to read him thinking about shooting Winston. That might come into play later. You did say Brewster again instead of harpster. Am I missing something? Do you do that on purpose? Or is it just a mistake? Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
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Well, I thought Lincoln was going to be lawn fertilizer, but he handled himself okay. It was interesting to read him thinking about shooting Winston. That might come into play later. You did say Brewster again instead of harpster. Am I missing something? Do you do that on purpose? Or is it just a mistake? Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
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Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Damn. Did I do that again? No, it's a total mistake. I don't know why I keep doing it either. I usually catch it cause I do it all the time when I'm writing it! Sorry I'm so behind on responses. I'm sure you see some of your influence though. You have great ideas that stick in my head! Brewster's Place or Brewster's Millions? I don't know what the hell is wrong with my brain....
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You're a writer, that's what's wrong with your head. I think most of us that call ourselves writers are wired a little different in the noggin than 'normal' people. :) Good to hear from you, yes I can see where I'm having some influence. I am very flattered that you listen to and use my ideas. That to me is the ultimate compliment one writer can give another. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching.