Short Form Poetry
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Comment from Charlene0513
A simple romantic gesture to comply with genuine motives to make adoration flourish.
Nice flow and with the accent of the picture "seals the deal."
Charlene
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A simple romantic gesture to comply with genuine motives to make adoration flourish.
Nice flow and with the accent of the picture "seals the deal."
Charlene
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from rouskin
Nice contest entry Excellent artwork too My favorite part :we can trust love look inside find me there Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
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Nice contest entry Excellent artwork too My favorite part :we can trust love look inside find me there Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a lovely romantic nonet, I would prefer to see the text without the spaces. all syllables correct.
Well done]
Good luck in the contest. Mary
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This is a lovely romantic nonet, I would prefer to see the text without the spaces. all syllables correct.
Well done]
Good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
This reads and sounds as though there is no form consideration. Lovely heartfelt sentiment. The beautiful presentation does not hurt in the least bit. This has my vote. Well done! NG
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This reads and sounds as though there is no form consideration. Lovely heartfelt sentiment. The beautiful presentation does not hurt in the least bit. This has my vote. Well done! NG
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your nonet does flow well and is written in the perfect form with the correct syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
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Your nonet does flow well and is written in the perfect form with the correct syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from damettagin
Wonderfully presented and displayed
Falling in love well expressed:
your eyes will hypnotize
my empty heart won't turn away
Hope that she feels the same:
look inside
find me
there
Well done
:) Dame
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Wonderfully presented and displayed
Falling in love well expressed:
your eyes will hypnotize
my empty heart won't turn away
Hope that she feels the same:
look inside
find me
there
Well done
:) Dame
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
Hm. Nonet in mostly complete thoughts. Neat. But there's a hint of "If anything happens I'll marry you;the check's in the mail." here.ah, c'est la vie.
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Hm. Nonet in mostly complete thoughts. Neat. But there's a hint of "If anything happens I'll marry you;the check's in the mail." here.ah, c'est la vie.
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Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the Nonet
I very much like your use of rhyme, which is not at all forced, and you're right, that can happen when you try to make everything rhyme perfectly
You do a good job of making the speaker sound genuine, reassuring and loving :-) Brooke
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Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the Nonet
I very much like your use of rhyme, which is not at all forced, and you're right, that can happen when you try to make everything rhyme perfectly
You do a good job of making the speaker sound genuine, reassuring and loving :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 10-May-2014