The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Media Circus"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
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Comment from ProjectBluebook
Good chapter, boss. I was thoroughly entertained. Looks good. Now, I need to backtrack to see what I missed. Looks like a lot of shit is fixin' to hit the fan. Cops. Shyster, I ain't hear of that word in a spell. I must remember that one. I like it. Got to run, ice job! count your doubloons.
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Good chapter, boss. I was thoroughly entertained. Looks good. Now, I need to backtrack to see what I missed. Looks like a lot of shit is fixin' to hit the fan. Cops. Shyster, I ain't hear of that word in a spell. I must remember that one. I like it. Got to run, ice job! count your doubloons.
Comment Written 13-May-2014
Comment from Michaelk
Good chapter. So they are finally turning things around and putting some pressure on the bad guys. I loved the press conference. Being able to thumb their noses at the chief and then arrest him on TV was awesome. And junior just fell flat on his face. I think this is going to light a powder keg. The one thing I'm curious about is Winston. How is he going to react? Good chapter, very brisk pace, nice snappy dialogue. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Good chapter. So they are finally turning things around and putting some pressure on the bad guys. I loved the press conference. Being able to thumb their noses at the chief and then arrest him on TV was awesome. And junior just fell flat on his face. I think this is going to light a powder keg. The one thing I'm curious about is Winston. How is he going to react? Good chapter, very brisk pace, nice snappy dialogue. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Comment Written 13-May-2014
Comment from CR Delport
NOw that I've read the previous chapter I am back on track. Junior is hopping mad and can see his whole world tumbling down. The Chief got a shock when he got arrested. This is another great chapter.
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NOw that I've read the previous chapter I am back on track. Junior is hopping mad and can see his whole world tumbling down. The Chief got a shock when he got arrested. This is another great chapter.
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Comment Written 13-May-2014