Comment from dennis0530

Excellent

Dear writer : You have just taken me for a walk on this lovely spring day. I take lungfuls of the invigorating fresh air. I see flowers blooming and my eyes witness life renewed and myself I feel renewed.

Such is the magic of springtime when the world wakes up from its dreary and wintry cold. Flowers in their burst of colors, creatures big and small stirred to a fresh start and life giving waters flow in brooks and rivers.

Nature signals all living creatures with renewed hope.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2014

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reply by the author on 18-May-2014

I am delighted you could share my walk and relished this spring day, too.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A veritable Spring fest unfolds here with all its attendant vernal delights 'the fallow fields await the plow- nice touch spelling of 'plow'

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 Comment Written 18-May-2014

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reply by the author on 18-May-2014

So pleased you could share my walk, zanya. Thank you for your lovely review.