Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

This is a cute write on a bad puppy asking for forgiveness for being bad. And hoping he don't end in the pound later. Nice write good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you Angel Debbie for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

So puppy. Well actually, it covers some old dogs, too. I swear the neighborhood dogs are celebrating the last week of school. They have all been so frisky this week. Delightful picture. I wish you well with the entry.

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 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you Jean for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Rohitnanda

Excellent

Loved the rhyme and the poem flows really well. The dog was naughty, playful, repentant, loving, scared and hopeful - great mix of emotions! I would love to find out about the family and what happens next...

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 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

Thank you Rohitnanda for your great feedback. I appreciate it :) Kindest regards...