Grandma's surprise
It ain't over till its over18 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your few words say it all
the final straw Viagra LOL
cheers..Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your few words say it all
the final straw Viagra LOL
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed.
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welcome..SC
Comment from marion
Am reviewing each entry in this competition. I've sets of six stars to give ... so why not to those in this competition! I won't compare them to anything else ... and hence it's a sixer for you. Love it!!!! Marion.
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Am reviewing each entry in this competition. I've sets of six stars to give ... so why not to those in this competition! I won't compare them to anything else ... and hence it's a sixer for you. Love it!!!! Marion.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
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Wow. Thank you for the bonus star. Glad you found it amusing.
Comment from Domino 2
I hope his 'rousing Viagra aided salute' was welcome by Grandma, and she didn't get an instant 'headache'. :-)
Fun write.
Best wishes, Ted
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I hope his 'rousing Viagra aided salute' was welcome by Grandma, and she didn't get an instant 'headache'. :-)
Fun write.
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 30-May-2014
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She died of shock...ha ha. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from LIJ Red
A clean 3/5/3,no mysticism five stars.
grandma bought little boy chemist a new bike. He created a
potion that temporarily turned earthworms into sticks
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A clean 3/5/3,no mysticism five stars.
grandma bought little boy chemist a new bike. He created a
potion that temporarily turned earthworms into sticks
Comment Written 30-May-2014
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Ha ha. Chip off the old block.
Comment from Jackarrie
A very good poem, but unfortunately it is the wrong syllables, the requirements is 3-5-3, and you have 5-7-6, I would not like to see you disqualified. If you change it I will change the rating. Mary
Much much better, it get right to the point,(no pun intended)
Good luck Mary
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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A very good poem, but unfortunately it is the wrong syllables, the requirements is 3-5-3, and you have 5-7-6, I would not like to see you disqualified. If you change it I will change the rating. Mary
Much much better, it get right to the point,(no pun intended)
Good luck Mary
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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I aleady changed it. thought it was words instead of syllables.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
LOL...!!
My grandpa, a farmer, at 81, said just because he couldn't dig as deep a furrow, didn't meant he couldn't get the tractor out of the barn!
Your poem makes a statement!
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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LOL...!!
My grandpa, a farmer, at 81, said just because he couldn't dig as deep a furrow, didn't meant he couldn't get the tractor out of the barn!
Your poem makes a statement!
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 30-May-2014
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Ha ha. had to make change contest was 3-5-3 syllable, not word count.
Comment from JB Lynn
I love how shameless you are with this poem. I laughed out loud, despite myself. Love the "salute" pun and the "bucket list" metaphor. The image you selected to go along with this is horrifyingly appropriate.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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I love how shameless you are with this poem. I laughed out loud, despite myself. Love the "salute" pun and the "bucket list" metaphor. The image you selected to go along with this is horrifyingly appropriate.
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Comment Written 30-May-2014
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Thanks for reviewing. Glad it brought a smile. I was really lucky to find that pic.
Comment from Glasstruth
Awesome artwork. LOL. The last line caught me by surprise. I guess we're never too old to feel that young again. Great humor! Thanks for sharing. Les
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reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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Awesome artwork. LOL. The last line caught me by surprise. I guess we're never too old to feel that young again. Great humor! Thanks for sharing. Les
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Comment Written 29-May-2014
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Thanks for reviewing.