The Chosen Muse
Short Story-Contest Entry-Shakespeare's Muse29 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
A genius can develop at any age. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
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A genius can develop at any age. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
This is a well-thought-out and articulated piece, one to surely be at the forefront of the contest committee for consideration.
You've done a remarkable job.
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This is a well-thought-out and articulated piece, one to surely be at the forefront of the contest committee for consideration.
You've done a remarkable job.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
Comment from DanielEkine
The entirety of this work is wonderful. Nicely done by the author.
""This is too big a task for Sensatillia. She makes allowances too readily. It portends a lack of boldness and the leanings of a doormat would result. She is simply unsuitable for a light of this luminosity."
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The entirety of this work is wonderful. Nicely done by the author.
""This is too big a task for Sensatillia. She makes allowances too readily. It portends a lack of boldness and the leanings of a doormat would result. She is simply unsuitable for a light of this luminosity."
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this Shakespeare's Muse contest entry is a strong contender with a delightful creative flair concerning the board meeting of the muses. The halibun style is fun. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this Shakespeare's Muse contest entry is a strong contender with a delightful creative flair concerning the board meeting of the muses. The halibun style is fun. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Really cool topic and an excellent entry. A gathering of fairies deciding who would be Shakespeare's muse- so that is what compelled him to write " A Midsummer' s Night Dream". Excellent lullaby poem too. Do you always write the poems specifically for the story or do you sometimes incorporate old poems?
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Really cool topic and an excellent entry. A gathering of fairies deciding who would be Shakespeare's muse- so that is what compelled him to write " A Midsummer' s Night Dream". Excellent lullaby poem too. Do you always write the poems specifically for the story or do you sometimes incorporate old poems?
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you! The first kind of book I wrote was an excuse to throw in some old poems. But, I usually just write something that fits. I'm always itching to write a poem! Its funny with all of the writing I have on the shelf, I haven't used anything old in months. Glad you liked this, I did too. mikey
Comment from missjosi
Yes I very much like this piece.... The muses all musing over Shakespeare... how intriguing indeed! This is what I liked the best... Very imaginative and wonderful.... Great work :)
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Yes I very much like this piece.... The muses all musing over Shakespeare... how intriguing indeed! This is what I liked the best... Very imaginative and wonderful.... Great work :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
Comment from seaglass
You have truly created a classic. This could be developed into a book that spans many artists of all kinds. What a lovely tale, "a muse assigned at birth."
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You have truly created a classic. This could be developed into a book that spans many artists of all kinds. What a lovely tale, "a muse assigned at birth."
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
Comment from l.raven
OMG Michael, this is nothing but amazing...where you come up with your writes is I don't know...but they are wonderful....so we get are muse when we are born...who would even think of something let that...when we receive our talent...A wonderful story told Michael...Shakespeare would give you a bow...love this one...Luff Linda xxoo
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OMG Michael, this is nothing but amazing...where you come up with your writes is I don't know...but they are wonderful....so we get are muse when we are born...who would even think of something let that...when we receive our talent...A wonderful story told Michael...Shakespeare would give you a bow...love this one...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I totally love this!! Very imaginative. Love the poem. Love the idea that we are "assigned" a muse at birth. Some might even call them guardian angels. One of your best, although I'm not supposed to know who this is. :D
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I totally love this!! Very imaginative. Love the poem. Love the idea that we are "assigned" a muse at birth. Some might even call them guardian angels. One of your best, although I'm not supposed to know who this is. :D
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
Comment from PearlW
This is absolutely brilliant. The language you chose to use, the 'fighting' amongst the muses as to who gets to inspire Shakespeare ... honestly, so original and well written.
What a pleasure to read this piece. Excellent work!
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This is absolutely brilliant. The language you chose to use, the 'fighting' amongst the muses as to who gets to inspire Shakespeare ... honestly, so original and well written.
What a pleasure to read this piece. Excellent work!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014