Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I like the mood established in the first line and the resolution in the final line. Your artwork selection is an intriguing, reinforcing image. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014

Thank you. I changed the title since you reviewed it. Hope it's a little improvement. So pleased you liked it. Thank you so much.

reply by Joan E. on 21-Jun-2014

Thanks for letting me know. I think your new title adds more punch! Good luck in the contest to both of us. Joan