lune (the bee)
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Comment from fairy77
that's not very funny:(Hope you had an epi pen. I liked this one:)It was displayed nicely. Good luck in the contest. Nice job! beth fairy77.
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that's not very funny:(Hope you had an epi pen. I liked this one:)It was displayed nicely. Good luck in the contest. Nice job! beth fairy77.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
My niece has the same allergy; a sting can be fatal. I bit into a big mac at lunch one day (outdoors of course), and a it was harboring a yellow jacket. It stung me several times inside the mouth before I could chew or spit it. My head swelled like a melon, but fortunately, subsided within a few hours time. Its not wise to wear any perfumed scents if you're working outdoors. I think I've rambled long enough, already. Good luck in the contest. Kenny
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My niece has the same allergy; a sting can be fatal. I bit into a big mac at lunch one day (outdoors of course), and a it was harboring a yellow jacket. It stung me several times inside the mouth before I could chew or spit it. My head swelled like a melon, but fortunately, subsided within a few hours time. Its not wise to wear any perfumed scents if you're working outdoors. I think I've rambled long enough, already. Good luck in the contest. Kenny
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Strong worded poem with such short number of words. Wish bees would pollinate my fruit trees. very scarce here. Best of luck .
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Strong worded poem with such short number of words. Wish bees would pollinate my fruit trees. very scarce here. Best of luck .
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - how adorable this lune is - not exactly a fun thing to have happen, though. :) I do wonder about perfumes, and personally, there aren't a lot that appeal to me (too strong). Maybe that's what attracts little critters like your stinging bee. :) Best of luck in the contest!
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LOL - how adorable this lune is - not exactly a fun thing to have happen, though. :) I do wonder about perfumes, and personally, there aren't a lot that appeal to me (too strong). Maybe that's what attracts little critters like your stinging bee. :) Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from DanielEkine
Haha, that is a crazy bee. Not surprised they are attracted to perfumes. Making you lunch wasn't part of the plan. Great job. A good rhyme in the poem and flow. The artwork is related to the diction of the author's poem. Great job. Very simple and pure.
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Haha, that is a crazy bee. Not surprised they are attracted to perfumes. Making you lunch wasn't part of the plan. Great job. A good rhyme in the poem and flow. The artwork is related to the diction of the author's poem. Great job. Very simple and pure.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Alan K Pease
I guess that being lunch for a bee has its bad points. Wearing perfume sometimes confuses these creatures and some other insects. Good luck in the contest.
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I guess that being lunch for a bee has its bad points. Wearing perfume sometimes confuses these creatures and some other insects. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from royowen
A lovely entry in this lune poetry contest! This is a bright cheery subject, that has a glow to it!, a good chance in this limiting poetic form! I like also the artwork which helps the narrative! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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A lovely entry in this lune poetry contest! This is a bright cheery subject, that has a glow to it!, a good chance in this limiting poetic form! I like also the artwork which helps the narrative! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from lancellot
Nice little poem, from a real life event. I wonder if the bees actually think a person has pollen on them. Perhaps they sting people when they see that they've been tricked.
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Nice little poem, from a real life event. I wonder if the bees actually think a person has pollen on them. Perhaps they sting people when they see that they've been tricked.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from BLACKDYKE
On the contrary, the contradiction
is that the bee gives rather than
takes a bite. Still, as a Lune it
fits the bill. The picture helps
things along nicely. Eric
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On the contrary, the contradiction
is that the bee gives rather than
takes a bite. Still, as a Lune it
fits the bill. The picture helps
things along nicely. Eric
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Ooo ouch. My dad is allergic...do you need an epi pen?
I am so sorry for this .....change perfumes?
I have been stung a lot when I was young...our neighbor was a bee keeper..
God bless
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Ooo ouch. My dad is allergic...do you need an epi pen?
I am so sorry for this .....change perfumes?
I have been stung a lot when I was young...our neighbor was a bee keeper..
God bless
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014