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Tribute to the African Woman19 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. This is apoignant poem. It nails the style and has a quiet dignity to it.
Good luck in the contest. I will make sure to vote.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Hi. This is apoignant poem. It nails the style and has a quiet dignity to it.
Good luck in the contest. I will make sure to vote.
padumachitta
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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thank you very much.
Comment from l.raven
HI Amahra, a wonderful poem for this Black woman who played a part in one of America's worst tragedies..slavery...very well written....and picture so perfect...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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HI Amahra, a wonderful poem for this Black woman who played a part in one of America's worst tragedies..slavery...very well written....and picture so perfect...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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thank you, Linda.
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always welcome...xxoo
Comment from Cajungirl
This is a beautifully written Codary poem. What a wonderful tribute to black women every where. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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This is a beautifully written Codary poem. What a wonderful tribute to black women every where. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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thank you. my dear.
Comment from Jay Squires
Oh... I am so thrilled that I have another 6 to give as an honor for as gorgeous a poem as this.
Your words: I was going to say they need to be read aloud. But, if they are read aloud, what a waste not to dance to them.
Your lines have an almost perfect pitch. I leave the "almost" because I am no expert on poetry. But, I do believe such an expert would confidently remove it.
Bless you, Amahra, for all you've done here.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Oh... I am so thrilled that I have another 6 to give as an honor for as gorgeous a poem as this.
Your words: I was going to say they need to be read aloud. But, if they are read aloud, what a waste not to dance to them.
Your lines have an almost perfect pitch. I leave the "almost" because I am no expert on poetry. But, I do believe such an expert would confidently remove it.
Bless you, Amahra, for all you've done here.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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thank you so much, Jay. you're "almost" is just find with me.
Comment from Carole Rosa
Amahra, Your poem is absolutely lovely and the presentation is perfect for your poetic piece. Your friend must feel honored that you wrote such a beautiful poem about her. Carole
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Amahra, Your poem is absolutely lovely and the presentation is perfect for your poetic piece. Your friend must feel honored that you wrote such a beautiful poem about her. Carole
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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thank you Carole. This poem is for the African woman in general.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very nice, amahra, and you're right, slavery is one of this nation's biggest, nasty stains. The other, in my humble opinion, is the treatment of Native American Indians by the white man.
A compelling portrait for a compelling poem.
Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Very nice, amahra, and you're right, slavery is one of this nation's biggest, nasty stains. The other, in my humble opinion, is the treatment of Native American Indians by the white man.
A compelling portrait for a compelling poem.
Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Dean.
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You're welcome.
Comment from c_lucas
An unusual structure, but well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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An unusual structure, but well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Hey Charlie, thank you.
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You're welcome, Amahra. Charlie
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is a powerful poem that speaks and makes you feel the touch of strength, wisdom, and wonder. Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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This is a powerful poem that speaks and makes you feel the touch of strength, wisdom, and wonder. Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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thank you Bobby, so glad you like it.
Comment from fairy77
Wow! Amahra that was a really great piece. The pic draws us in and the words hold us there. I loved this and felt you aced it. Good topic and glad you wrote of it:)beth fairy77.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Wow! Amahra that was a really great piece. The pic draws us in and the words hold us there. I loved this and felt you aced it. Good topic and glad you wrote of it:)beth fairy77.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much,Beth. I fell in love with the picture.