Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from DALLAS01
Excellent forward motion here. Very fast paced. Loved the dimensions 6x6x6. You are producing chapters at a faster rate which really parallels the climatic feel. Now that Eddie is gone, who is father Brian going to have to exorcise? Could it be Tony?
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Excellent forward motion here. Very fast paced. Loved the dimensions 6x6x6. You are producing chapters at a faster rate which really parallels the climatic feel. Now that Eddie is gone, who is father Brian going to have to exorcise? Could it be Tony?
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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He'll be facing the force behind it all, is my plan. The so-called dog is still out there.
Thanks so much, Dallas. Yes, I'm inspired to get this novel finished - at long last - and move on to another project. But I want to take the time I need to do it right. Really close now.
Much appreciated, my friend.
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I sense that it is drawing to a close. Does any of this come to you in your sleep. Just curious.
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A good question, Dallas. I do get my best inspiration just before I fall asleep. When the house is quiet and I'm all tucked in, my mind feels free to explore possibilities.
Comment from Zue65
Wow, I like the turn of events happening in your story, I love too, the fact that Father Brian is awakened and he still value The Lord Jesus as his Savior. The plot thickens but everything is clearing up to a productive finish eventually. I look forward for the triumph of good over evil in the conclusion of your story. God bless.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Wow, I like the turn of events happening in your story, I love too, the fact that Father Brian is awakened and he still value The Lord Jesus as his Savior. The plot thickens but everything is clearing up to a productive finish eventually. I look forward for the triumph of good over evil in the conclusion of your story. God bless.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Nassus. I believe in the power of God's light, and so have always wanted that to be the emphasis in this story. Though there will be other forces to assist, the priniciple winner here must be Father's Brian's faith. I really appreciate the generous and encouraging review. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Joan E.
You set the tone well for this chapter with the ominous picture and quote from the chief exorcist! I noted the reference to 666 as well! Once again you appealed to many senses with the "sharp-tooth edge of the saw" and the scent of "Armani" plus the "funnel-shapped mist" and "burned-up twig" simile. This was an action-filled chapter with more built up suspense at the end. Very well conceived and crafted- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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You set the tone well for this chapter with the ominous picture and quote from the chief exorcist! I noted the reference to 666 as well! Once again you appealed to many senses with the "sharp-tooth edge of the saw" and the scent of "Armani" plus the "funnel-shapped mist" and "burned-up twig" simile. This was an action-filled chapter with more built up suspense at the end. Very well conceived and crafted- Joan
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much, Joan. I so appreciate this encouraging and generous review. Thanks for mentioning a couple of areas I took special time with. That means a lot to me!
Hugs, Bev
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I always pleased when my reactions strike positive chords! More hugs- Joan
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You are a truly gracious lady, Joan. Pleasure knowin' you! Hugs, Bev
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Hi, Bev. I haven't checked in for a while on this interesting story. You definitely write at a professional level. Never question that. I enjoy your writing but have been just swamped with reviews and finishing my second book on disabilities. Things are quieting down a bit, sio I will become a fan so I catch your work more often. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Hi, Bev. I haven't checked in for a while on this interesting story. You definitely write at a professional level. Never question that. I enjoy your writing but have been just swamped with reviews and finishing my second book on disabilities. Things are quieting down a bit, sio I will become a fan so I catch your work more often. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Hi, Debbie. Thank you so much for your kind and generous review. How exciting that you are about to publish your second book! I'm really impressed, my friend. I will be taking my time and working with an editor on this novel when I get the story done - soon! - so I can imagine how busy you've been.
Hope you have a nice 4th of July!
Hugs, Bev
Comment from His Grayness
Dear writingfundimension: You have a REAL talent for creating 'grip" the true foundation (in my opinion) of any good writing. I cannot offer ANY recommendations to this work so far as it is truly compelling, unique, and I can already imagine a movie coming out of this. Although NOT AT ALL my typical subject of delight, it is delivered in a package that I would be willing to open! Great work! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Dear writingfundimension: You have a REAL talent for creating 'grip" the true foundation (in my opinion) of any good writing. I cannot offer ANY recommendations to this work so far as it is truly compelling, unique, and I can already imagine a movie coming out of this. Although NOT AT ALL my typical subject of delight, it is delivered in a package that I would be willing to open! Great work! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Dear Vance, thank you so much for this awesome review! I appreciate you stopping in to read this chapter, and offering such wonderful encouragement. That means a lot to me.
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is another fantastic post. You have done a great job with descriptions and the characters. The dialogue flows naturally. good job.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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This is another fantastic post. You have done a great job with descriptions and the characters. The dialogue flows naturally. good job.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much. I'm really looking forward to reading the first chapter of your new novel. It seems we both really enjoy the Native American cultures.
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I hope you will help me. My grandmother was supposed to Native American but she refused to discuss it. I am having to rely on research.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
I like the well thought out of this storyline, though I have not beeing reading but your writing style picked me with the drift in the post. A smooth run through out the post
ola thomas
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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I like the well thought out of this storyline, though I have not beeing reading but your writing style picked me with the drift in the post. A smooth run through out the post
ola thomas
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for your generous and encouraging review, Ola. Much appreciated! :) Bev
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
Wow! What an amazing piece of mystery fiction! I really enjoyed this! Now, I wanna go back and read it from the start. I can't wait to see what happens next as well~!
THanks for sharing~
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Hello there~!
Wow! What an amazing piece of mystery fiction! I really enjoyed this! Now, I wanna go back and read it from the start. I can't wait to see what happens next as well~!
THanks for sharing~
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Kausar. I love your review! Very encouraging and generous of you. And much appreciated by me.
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Adri7enne
Lots of bad guys coming together - coming to an end. So Edward Pearce digs his own grave and ends up in it. Guess the devil has a gun! LOL!
And now Father Brian is off to his last Alamo. With Rick. Big drama, Bev. Lots of action before the wind down. Well done, girl.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Lots of bad guys coming together - coming to an end. So Edward Pearce digs his own grave and ends up in it. Guess the devil has a gun! LOL!
And now Father Brian is off to his last Alamo. With Rick. Big drama, Bev. Lots of action before the wind down. Well done, girl.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, my friend. Your support and encouragement mean a lot to me. I've a soft spot for Rick. Like Father Brian, I'd love to same him! Hugs, Bev
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give.
This as always was great.
There was never a dull moment. And to think with all this you have more to write. LOL
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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I have no more stars to give.
This as always was great.
There was never a dull moment. And to think with all this you have more to write. LOL
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Cookie. I really appreciate the grand review. :) Bev
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You're very welcome. Have a safe and nice 4th.
until next time.
Cookie
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You as well, Cookie.
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You're very welcome. Until next time.
Cookie
sorry I'm sop late to answer.
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No problem at all, Cookie. XX Bev
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Until next time my friend.
Cookie