Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Great chapter, Mike. I have no doubt that somewhere, someone is working on a "time travel app."

"Loving the 'ye olde' kitchen." ('the' looks and sounds out of place here.)

The Roux brothers call me one of their (prot�?�©g�?�©s).

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 Comment Written 04-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014

Thank you, mumsyone :-). On reflection, I agree about the apostrophes there, and the other thing was our old friend evil eddie messing up my accents! Really glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Mike

Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Warm, natural dialogue and narrative that takes us somewhere unexpected. Always a good hook. prot�?�©g�?�©s. That so has to be a major TOM glitch. Really frustrating but fixable. Good write - DJ

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 Comment Written 04-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014

Thank you, DJ :-). Yes, that was Fanstory's inability to handle accents. I haven't had that happen in a while!

Mike