Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "What good is a man"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from playinaround
Wow! This is really deep and well written. I am a woman but I identify with the words none the less. Thank you for sharing this meaningful write!!
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Wow! This is really deep and well written. I am a woman but I identify with the words none the less. Thank you for sharing this meaningful write!!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Caressa_08
Great picture you have chosen to tell, a tale that we fight daily with this world of sin & temptation that draws us away, at times from our main purpose of why we are alive with each of us having a soul that is being tried & tested.
Caressa
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Great picture you have chosen to tell, a tale that we fight daily with this world of sin & temptation that draws us away, at times from our main purpose of why we are alive with each of us having a soul that is being tried & tested.
Caressa
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose to go with your poem, is a perfect match.
It tells it all and answers your question . Man is nothing without respect and love for himself.
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The artwork you choose to go with your poem, is a perfect match.
It tells it all and answers your question . Man is nothing without respect and love for himself.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from MizKat
Hi GW,
I don't know how to answer the questions in your poem, although I don't suppose you really expect it. I do know that I like what you wrote and everything else you have written.
Kat
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Hi GW,
I don't know how to answer the questions in your poem, although I don't suppose you really expect it. I do know that I like what you wrote and everything else you have written.
Kat
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
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Thank you Ms K
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You can call me Kat. It's the first three letters of my first name. Miz is the first three letters of my last name.
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thanks Kat
Gary
Comment from colorfree
Beautifully written. I normally have suggestions but this doesn't need any! My favorite line is "His mind lost in the translation of unspoken words". Thanks for sharing!
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Beautifully written. I normally have suggestions but this doesn't need any! My favorite line is "His mind lost in the translation of unspoken words". Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from daeneam
I agree. Before we can understand others, we must first understand ourselves. This is the very essence of our conscience. Greatly penned. c", Mae
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I agree. Before we can understand others, we must first understand ourselves. This is the very essence of our conscience. Greatly penned. c", Mae
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
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Thank you Mae
Comment from Charlene0513
To deepwater,
When the incomprehension of a man's manhood is compromised by uncouth manners and the unkind ways that someone shows when his love is denied can leave him less than a macho man.
Charlene
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To deepwater,
When the incomprehension of a man's manhood is compromised by uncouth manners and the unkind ways that someone shows when his love is denied can leave him less than a macho man.
Charlene
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
It looks like you've sneaked in a 14-syllable (or so) per line format with an ABCB rhyme scheme (maybe). The message here seems to stress how men (people) waste so much energy on unsubstantiated innuendo or other unimportant distractions while life and its necessary obligations go by unnoticed.
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It looks like you've sneaked in a 14-syllable (or so) per line format with an ABCB rhyme scheme (maybe). The message here seems to stress how men (people) waste so much energy on unsubstantiated innuendo or other unimportant distractions while life and its necessary obligations go by unnoticed.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hi again
I am your newest fan. I am enjoying your works. I have been off here for nearly 9 months so I'll be tagging along
Bear
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Hi again
I am your newest fan. I am enjoying your works. I have been off here for nearly 9 months so I'll be tagging along
Bear
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
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thanks Bear, hope to see you on the next one
Gary
Comment from Christine B.
What good is a man without individual philosophy enforced by willingness to express however necessary? A man is damned, really, without a distinct belonging, without a place in the sea of life that isn't infiltrated. Intriguing write.
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What good is a man without individual philosophy enforced by willingness to express however necessary? A man is damned, really, without a distinct belonging, without a place in the sea of life that isn't infiltrated. Intriguing write.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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thank you Christina for reading