Widow Prigstone's Orphanage
Supernatural Flash Fiction18 total reviews
Comment from sibhus
This definitely gives ya the willies. The thought of a bunch of half-dead children being dug out of their graves, only to feast on you gives ya the shivers. Good super-natural story that makes an excellent entry for this prompt. good stuff, and good luck.
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This definitely gives ya the willies. The thought of a bunch of half-dead children being dug out of their graves, only to feast on you gives ya the shivers. Good super-natural story that makes an excellent entry for this prompt. good stuff, and good luck.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
This is terrific - love the tension level - grabs you at the start and stays till the last line - looking forward to additions if you decide to go on.
If not, even as a standalone I think this is great. Ya just know the jerks should have left the damn pile of waving arms alone.
I wish I had a six - if I get them tomorrow - will come back and raise it! Great story. AT=/
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This is terrific - love the tension level - grabs you at the start and stays till the last line - looking forward to additions if you decide to go on.
If not, even as a standalone I think this is great. Ya just know the jerks should have left the damn pile of waving arms alone.
I wish I had a six - if I get them tomorrow - will come back and raise it! Great story. AT=/
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, the orphanage of zombies that the policemen saved and were rewarded for their efforts by being bitten. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, mystery writer, the orphanage of zombies that the policemen saved and were rewarded for their efforts by being bitten. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from Domino 2
I wish I had a sixer left for this hilariously gory massacre, and resurrection of the hungry zombies.
The cops are even crazier than the monsters. :-)
The dialogue is so funny but sort of real in the crazy circumstances.
Horror laughs unlimited!
The best short prose read I've had in ages - I was riveted to every crazy sick word and action, and great artwork to compliment.
Brilliant!
Cheers, Ray
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I wish I had a sixer left for this hilariously gory massacre, and resurrection of the hungry zombies.
The cops are even crazier than the monsters. :-)
The dialogue is so funny but sort of real in the crazy circumstances.
Horror laughs unlimited!
The best short prose read I've had in ages - I was riveted to every crazy sick word and action, and great artwork to compliment.
Brilliant!
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. I see you added multiple images like someone else we know, but I like the open end you left to the story and the slight doubt you cast from the beginning. Well done, Sir. I think we have a winner here.
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Very interesting. I see you added multiple images like someone else we know, but I like the open end you left to the story and the slight doubt you cast from the beginning. Well done, Sir. I think we have a winner here.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
Comment from Cajungirl
fantastic job
Your story captured my attention from the very beginning. I think that Captain wished he would have listened about those kids or whatever they were. best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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fantastic job
Your story captured my attention from the very beginning. I think that Captain wished he would have listened about those kids or whatever they were. best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this. It's a little out of my usual genre. So, it was kind of fun to write. Delighted that you found it successful. Thank you so much!!
Comment from nordicgirl
Goodness. That is about the creepiest most nightmare producing little tale I have read in a long time. Great job. True flash fiction too. No wasted words. Breakneck pace. I think this will be the one to beat. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Goodness. That is about the creepiest most nightmare producing little tale I have read in a long time. Great job. True flash fiction too. No wasted words. Breakneck pace. I think this will be the one to beat. Good luck.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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A great review. Just the reaction I'm looking for. I'm stoked now. Maybe this has a chance. Thanks for the great vote of confidence.
Comment from c_lucas
Definitely not a Sunday dinner read. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very ghoulish read.
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Definitely not a Sunday dinner read. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very ghoulish read.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Great. Sounds like the reaction I'm looking for! Tried to post on Friday so everyone would be over it by dinner time on Sunday. Hahaha. Thank you!
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You're welcome.