Grand Operating Design
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
You've done an excellent technical job with this essay, John. Additionally, you've demonstrated the ability to use metaphors most effectively. Perception is reality, of course, and you do a good job of exposing the misconceptions used to control populations and individuals in modern society. I knew there was a reason I just don't like people...individuls are okay, but people...nah! Well done, sir. :) nancy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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You've done an excellent technical job with this essay, John. Additionally, you've demonstrated the ability to use metaphors most effectively. Perception is reality, of course, and you do a good job of exposing the misconceptions used to control populations and individuals in modern society. I knew there was a reason I just don't like people...individuls are okay, but people...nah! Well done, sir. :) nancy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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One-on-One communication is usually helpful to teach and learn. Adding others to discuss the same topic usually brings that communication to a lower level. If a majority of the population thinks the same way, it usually wallows in mediocrity. Many thanks for the kind words and and review...John
Comment from Nosha17
I agree with some of the things you are commenting on, the technical stuff I will leave to those experts as I am a linguist. I agree that the population is being dumbed down deliberately to maintain control of the flock of sheep. Like you said, it is up to the individual to steer clear of the hypnotising elements of life (I have no TV, I am too busy writing poetry-mostly realistic experiences, not too much fantasy or fiction! or learning new things about the world and its research)and use the brain wisely and thus avoid conflict and lead a better life. Interesting theories you have propounded here and it is very readable. Faye
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I agree with some of the things you are commenting on, the technical stuff I will leave to those experts as I am a linguist. I agree that the population is being dumbed down deliberately to maintain control of the flock of sheep. Like you said, it is up to the individual to steer clear of the hypnotising elements of life (I have no TV, I am too busy writing poetry-mostly realistic experiences, not too much fantasy or fiction! or learning new things about the world and its research)and use the brain wisely and thus avoid conflict and lead a better life. Interesting theories you have propounded here and it is very readable. Faye
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you very much. Once the deceit of society dissolves, we can all truly love each other as we should. I appreciate the kind words and review...John
Comment from rjpurdy
A compelling and provocative piece of writing that has a great deal of significance. Professionally written and I can find nothing technical to critic. I applaude your use of axioms (con-sequences). As a seeker and a believer I especially appreciate the depth of meaning and care you display. I look forqward to more. Thank you Cogitator!
Peace & Grace
rjpurdy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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A compelling and provocative piece of writing that has a great deal of significance. Professionally written and I can find nothing technical to critic. I applaude your use of axioms (con-sequences). As a seeker and a believer I especially appreciate the depth of meaning and care you display. I look forqward to more. Thank you Cogitator!
Peace & Grace
rjpurdy
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Nothing would please me more than helping others see their own perfection underneath the facade. Thank you for the review and stellar rating...John
Comment from chasennov
How we work 'Grand Operating Design.' This is a great Essay you have created here, and I liked the power in the formulation of the narrative. The structure was sound as well. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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How we work 'Grand Operating Design.' This is a great Essay you have created here, and I liked the power in the formulation of the narrative. The structure was sound as well. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Your comments are welcomed. There will be more shortly. Thanks for the review...John
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You are most welcome, John.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is very well composed and I think even Aquinas would be proud of the thoughts you pen in this narrative. Our belief systems trigger what becomes real for us which is why the seeker ventures into the deeper truths behind the commonly held theories. You touch on QP only slightly, which I find interesting since it was a key piece of the puzzle for me. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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This is very well composed and I think even Aquinas would be proud of the thoughts you pen in this narrative. Our belief systems trigger what becomes real for us which is why the seeker ventures into the deeper truths behind the commonly held theories. You touch on QP only slightly, which I find interesting since it was a key piece of the puzzle for me. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the encouraging words and the kind review. If I can stay on track, the following chapters will delve into details of this essay. Thanks again...John
Comment from PatVallesMangan
This is an amazing Non-Fiction essay. The author powerfully presents our situation here on planet Earth and what we are doing to it and to ourselves. Also the likening of qualities of a corporation to body parts was a well constructed idea. As I read this I wondered what will happen. I spend a lot of time doing that as an environmental activist and a Spiritual person and totally relate to everything you said. "Mother Earth will decide if we are worthy of living in her body..." was an excellent description of what is truly the case. I truly enjoyed this read. I really look forward to the promised "more to come." Namaste'
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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This is an amazing Non-Fiction essay. The author powerfully presents our situation here on planet Earth and what we are doing to it and to ourselves. Also the likening of qualities of a corporation to body parts was a well constructed idea. As I read this I wondered what will happen. I spend a lot of time doing that as an environmental activist and a Spiritual person and totally relate to everything you said. "Mother Earth will decide if we are worthy of living in her body..." was an excellent description of what is truly the case. I truly enjoyed this read. I really look forward to the promised "more to come." Namaste'
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for the kind words and wonderful review. If interested, you will find most of my unfinished essays in my portfolio. Thanks again...John
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, John.
I really enjoyed reading your well written essay, and I'm sure you'll be expanding on the points made here in future writes. Interesting fact, that the acronym for Grand Operating Design (GOD) is GOD. Pretty thought provoking too, given the religious implications.
The corpus callosum portion of our brains is so very vital to the collaboration of the right and left brains working in harmonious unity. It connects the left and right sides of the brain allowing for communication between both hemispheres. The corpus callosum transfers motor, sensory, and cognitive information between the brain hemispheres.
Thanks for sharing this information with all of us. I felt it was an easy to understand and fascinating read.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Hey, John.
I really enjoyed reading your well written essay, and I'm sure you'll be expanding on the points made here in future writes. Interesting fact, that the acronym for Grand Operating Design (GOD) is GOD. Pretty thought provoking too, given the religious implications.
The corpus callosum portion of our brains is so very vital to the collaboration of the right and left brains working in harmonious unity. It connects the left and right sides of the brain allowing for communication between both hemispheres. The corpus callosum transfers motor, sensory, and cognitive information between the brain hemispheres.
Thanks for sharing this information with all of us. I felt it was an easy to understand and fascinating read.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for the kind words. It is refreshing to have someone actually see through to my real meaning. You are correct that the topics here will be expanded into a series of essays that define, refine and redefine thought. Pleasure...John
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You are very welcome, John. I look forward to reading more.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I enjoyed this article. I am much in favour of watching, and being aware of our mental states. Of creating a 'gap' between thinking/feeling and doing.
My favorite bit of this is talk about the ego. It is ego that makes us think we have the 'right' to kill and maim othrs for being 'wrong'.
Anayway, well written and good luck.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Hi. I enjoyed this article. I am much in favour of watching, and being aware of our mental states. Of creating a 'gap' between thinking/feeling and doing.
My favorite bit of this is talk about the ego. It is ego that makes us think we have the 'right' to kill and maim othrs for being 'wrong'.
Anayway, well written and good luck.
padumachitta
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the kind words and review...John
Comment from mikemagine
Very erudite writing that fascinates me. Yep, I think you have a good title for this. You miss not a point in your writing, which though very sophisticated is also not difficult to read and understand.
Very well done!
Mike
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Very erudite writing that fascinates me. Yep, I think you have a good title for this. You miss not a point in your writing, which though very sophisticated is also not difficult to read and understand.
Very well done!
Mike
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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I hope to expand each point into its own chapter for an upcoming book. Thank you for the review...John
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Glad to, John!
Comment from Karen B.
Interesting and thought provoking. Rather long but is well organized, making it a bit easier to read. Good examples given to support many of your theories. I will look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Interesting and thought provoking. Rather long but is well organized, making it a bit easier to read. Good examples given to support many of your theories. I will look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the review and I hope you read more related essays in my portfolio...John