Comment from ashimpandit

Average

Dear friends,
I just read your literature.You wrote "love upon desert sands" is a so good.But chose a adult picture.That is not right.Your meaningful write and this picture between no match for your feelings.Improve more.

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 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

no I like the why it is as so do other

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Another nicely written poem just like the last one. A great imagine of words to paint a picture without the picture being needed. Great write.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Very well done. You paint a vivid picture for the reader that it is easy to associate with. Excellent word choices - sensual, dynamic and poetic. A great picture to accompany your word. I loved the whole artistic presentation.

Thank you for sharing your talent once more.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

thank you for reading

Comment from DerivedBetter

Good

Once again great poem GW, it was intense and erotic as it was meant to be. The only problem I had was I feel like you are missing a word or I'm just not understanding the line that stats "what more". Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

thanks for this

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

What a lovely and sensuous poem this is. Your carefully chosen words describe how true love makes the physical act so much more pleasurable. Very nicely written. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

thanks Lou

Comment from SilverWoulfCreations

Excellent

Lovely art and words. Well written and very enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing this passionate moment here with us on FSR. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

thank you for this

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Very steamy, Gary, especially given the locale. This made me thing of Arabian Nights, a story inspired by the ancient erotic and mysterious tales of the Middle East. The main story concerns an innocent young man who comes to fall in love with a slave who selected him as her master. After his foolish error causes their separation, he travels in search of her. Various other travelers who recount their own tragic and romantic experiences include stories of a young man who becomes enraptured by a mysterious woman on his wedding day, and a man who is determined to free a woman from a demon.

Great work.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

thanks Dean

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Aug-2014

No worries, mate.:)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

You certainly created vivid imagery and found jsust the right picture to compliment it.
Drawing tight pressing your soul to intermingle with mine
we move as one under the stars from this evening so divine,
Loved the end lines

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from Kim14

Excellent

This was a sensual poem. It was very good. My first romance poem. " Cube of ice melts on touch screams your wildest desires". Favorite phrase. I felt it flowed into each new phrase with no problem, woulod not change anything, great job,:))

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thank you Kim for the review

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Gary, another great piece of poetry my friend, this one conjures up images of the long gone 'Turkish delight' adverts that were shown here in the 70's, very romantic with a great picture to accompany.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks Eric

reply by Eric1 on 25-Aug-2014

You are most welcome my friend, great poem.