Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

This one reads easily. Nothing seems forced. I like the choice black and white. also like the alliteration.
These prompts are not as easy as they look.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014

Thanks! Yes, they're not as easy as they look. Glad you liked the alliteration and photo choice. Appreciate your comments ... ;)

reply by DALLAS01 on 27-Aug-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

It hangs together except that the idea of proud clouds is as far fetched as an English joke. But what the hell, this is no longer a site for writers, it is a site for valuless competitions.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This Rhyme That 1-6-1 writing prompt entry meets the requirements of the contest successfully. It is creative and personifies thunder in a unique way. All the best in the contest! Well done. :0 GracieAnn

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Appreciate all your comments ... ;)

Comment from DerivedBetter

Excellent

These short poems while good are sometimes hard to comment on. This was well written and pretty powerful for what it was. A very nice play on words. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014

Thanks. Yes, these short poems are hard to comment on. Glad you liked the word choices in this 1-6-1.
Appreciate your comments ... ;o)