Nothing Is Impossible
100 Word story20 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
Ah, terrific last line - just when the reader is expecting a splat on top of a bystanders head - he flies. Enjoyed the way it led down the primrose path. Best wishes in this contest. AT=/
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Ah, terrific last line - just when the reader is expecting a splat on top of a bystanders head - he flies. Enjoyed the way it led down the primrose path. Best wishes in this contest. AT=/
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Proof positive that all things are possible if only you believe in them badly enough and dare to try. Of course, I don't believe I'll be trying it anytime soon myself, but I never have been much of a risk taker.
Well done, and good luck...
"I believe I can fly. I believe I can touch the sky. I think bout it every night and day. I spread my wings and fl-y-y-y-y away..."
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Proof positive that all things are possible if only you believe in them badly enough and dare to try. Of course, I don't believe I'll be trying it anytime soon myself, but I never have been much of a risk taker.
Well done, and good luck...
"I believe I can fly. I believe I can touch the sky. I think bout it every night and day. I spread my wings and fl-y-y-y-y away..."
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from humpwhistle
An interesting story, Mikey (font color and format--hardly blind, except to a blind man), with a highly improbable resolution. Lots going on for a 100 word story.
I'm not sure how many characters are speaking. That unsettles me a bit. And the two photo don't jibe.
Best of luck in the blind contest.
Peace, Lee
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An interesting story, Mikey (font color and format--hardly blind, except to a blind man), with a highly improbable resolution. Lots going on for a 100 word story.
I'm not sure how many characters are speaking. That unsettles me a bit. And the two photo don't jibe.
Best of luck in the blind contest.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Now this is a story in a hundred words!!! I did not see that ending coming and it was downright thrilling. What a great little piece. Nothing will top this!
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Now this is a story in a hundred words!!! I did not see that ending coming and it was downright thrilling. What a great little piece. Nothing will top this!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from adewpearl
It was gross, man - add comma for direct address
Excellent use of dialogue that reveals the emotions and attitudes of various characters
You get inside the jumper's inner thoughts well
I love the surprise ending :-)
and how in the world can those stupid programs disagree about the number of words?? LOL
Brooke
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It was gross, man - add comma for direct address
Excellent use of dialogue that reveals the emotions and attitudes of various characters
You get inside the jumper's inner thoughts well
I love the surprise ending :-)
and how in the world can those stupid programs disagree about the number of words?? LOL
Brooke
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from DerivedBetter
That would indeed be a sight to watch. Nice little story, although I don't know anybody mean enough to tell jump jump, lol. Thanks for sharing.
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That would indeed be a sight to watch. Nice little story, although I don't know anybody mean enough to tell jump jump, lol. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of "Nothing is Impossible." I had to laugh at your category. It is hardly "Self Improvement Fiction". It definitely fiction, but not "Self Improvement." It certainly qualifies for a one hundred word story. Good job. Carole
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To the author of "Nothing is Impossible." I had to laugh at your category. It is hardly "Self Improvement Fiction". It definitely fiction, but not "Self Improvement." It certainly qualifies for a one hundred word story. Good job. Carole
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Word Counter ( http://www.wordcountertool.com/ ) says 100, and it's always accurate. Bookmark it.
Very weird story, but it's imaginative. :)
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Word Counter ( http://www.wordcountertool.com/ ) says 100, and it's always accurate. Bookmark it.
Very weird story, but it's imaginative. :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from Eigle Rull
This is a great story with a wonderful ending. It is very well written with a somewhat scary plot to it. The dialog sounded real and I enjoyed it. It is definitely interesting and it held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading this chilling little tale, it is excellent, my friend.
Always with respect,
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This is a great story with a wonderful ending. It is very well written with a somewhat scary plot to it. The dialog sounded real and I enjoyed it. It is definitely interesting and it held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading this chilling little tale, it is excellent, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
This 100 Word Story writing prompt entry fulfills the elements of the contest with a creative and unexpected ending that has a wonderful touch of humor. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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This 100 Word Story writing prompt entry fulfills the elements of the contest with a creative and unexpected ending that has a wonderful touch of humor. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2014