Words
An essence poem about what we can do with words36 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I like this one, the message, in perfect syllable count is clear. If we can but change our sharp words we can mend broken hearts. The internal and end rhyming is good. :-) Carolyn
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I like this one, the message, in perfect syllable count is clear. If we can but change our sharp words we can mend broken hearts. The internal and end rhyming is good. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
Comment from words
I do agree. Seems like I spent the first half of my life talking and the last half, eating those words. LOL
Very well said.
I speak less now.
Hugs,d
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I do agree. Seems like I spent the first half of my life talking and the last half, eating those words. LOL
Very well said.
I speak less now.
Hugs,d
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Glasstruth
Nice rhyme. The second line is a very clever metaphor. For a two-liner, you did just fine. Well crafted. Good luck with the contest. Les
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Nice rhyme. The second line is a very clever metaphor. For a two-liner, you did just fine. Well crafted. Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Good essence poem structure having six syllables in each line with internal and end rhymes.
Love the message in this poem.
Good luck in the contest
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Good essence poem structure having six syllables in each line with internal and end rhymes.
Love the message in this poem.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Wow! Charging those spoken darts beneath candle light. Nice poem it has a lot of power to be just a few words. Hope you win the comntest.
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Wow! Charging those spoken darts beneath candle light. Nice poem it has a lot of power to be just a few words. Hope you win the comntest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from JM
Beautiful flowers, very colorful artwork. It's very hard to take back hurtful words. But I'm with you, I have had to retract my spitefulness a few times. Great poem.
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Beautiful flowers, very colorful artwork. It's very hard to take back hurtful words. But I'm with you, I have had to retract my spitefulness a few times. Great poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from zanya
Yes most definitely two of the most highly significant activities we can engage in through the power of words - well captured in this ESSENCE poem.
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Yes most definitely two of the most highly significant activities we can engage in through the power of words - well captured in this ESSENCE poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
If we could all learn to be much more patient and have the love and trust in our hearts that God so richly gave for the forgiveness of our sins this world would be a lot better off.
Charlene
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If we could all learn to be much more patient and have the love and trust in our hearts that God so richly gave for the forgiveness of our sins this world would be a lot better off.
Charlene
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Emily George
This is very succinct and therefore very clever in its execution. "Spoken darts" what powerful words when coupled together.
The flowers and scented candles the sweet healing of words.
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This is very succinct and therefore very clever in its execution. "Spoken darts" what powerful words when coupled together.
The flowers and scented candles the sweet healing of words.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from mfowler
Simple but effective message relayed in two well composed short lines. Fix what you say, or the communication between two people will breakdown. Yes, an important point about relationship. I really liked your rhyme in this. I thought it worked very effectively. Good luck.
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Simple but effective message relayed in two well composed short lines. Fix what you say, or the communication between two people will breakdown. Yes, an important point about relationship. I really liked your rhyme in this. I thought it worked very effectively. Good luck.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014