Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahahahaha! You continue to entertain this old kid with your brilliance mate. Now my daughter (champers) is running around pretending she is a centipede with my shoes on. You continue to help my family enjoy life through your work and I thank you for it. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thank you for sharing the story with me. I can just see it now. little 'Champers' with her Dads shoes on. :-) Carolyn

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

This is a darling post. I'm sure your grandchildren love it too. A witty topic, centipede and what they would wear on their feet. Loved it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

This was such a fun poem to write. I laughed as I composed it. So glad you liked it too. :-) Carolyn

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm glad God made me human, but more importantly, in His image, a fine poem, Carolyn, in the fine tradition of adewpearl, Brooke, a very amusing work which would have understandably loved this nicely scribed.
I know there has to be a certain amount of poems or writings, to gain a ranking, I still don't understand the frenetic posting, same amount of reviews, much more posting = less reviews per post! more posting means less time for important things, just a thought! I didn't understand anything until April, 2014, I still finished 8th poet and 4 reviewer, well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

So glad you liked this one Roy,
I finished 2014 at 60 for poetry. I went ahead and posted 2 each day to equal six while still reviewing. I was shocked when I saw my rating as I figured I would just start out where I was. Oh well, it's more than I can figure out. But so much fun... I somehow must find time for a few short stories, and I didn't post on my novel at all last year. Can only do so much.
Love you and E.
:-) Carolyn

reply by royowen on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks and you and Larry took,

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn,

Well this is so darn cute. Nice Grandma writing for the grandkids. We are a soft touch for sure.

The artwork is really cute too, with all the shoes on the centipede. Very creative.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Dear Jax,
this was so much fun to write. I laughed as it came together. So glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks,
:-) Carolyn

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

This is a very charming little poem that speaks to the child inside the reader.

My 3 year old would love this one. I can see this as a book with a verse per page with delightful illustrations.

Nicely done

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

May I hire you as my agent.... LOL.. actually your wonderful comment about the book gives me food for thought. I hope your little one loves it. Thank you so much.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

High Carolyn,

What a darling little poem this is. I really enjoyed reading and got some smiles from it too. I love all the poetry you write because you're very good at it. Keep up the wonderful work, my friend.

Kat

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Please read this one to Dylan, Print it out if you like. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Kat, Love, Carolyn