Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Patricia: such a fabulous 5/7/5 poem and picture. That baby is gorgeous and looks so happy being close to her daddy. I hope that closeness continues. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Linda

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks Linda for the nice review. The father of the has muscular Dystrophy. He has had it since he was a young lad and he never dreamed he would marry or have children. So this child is so special to him.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

What a precious little munchkin and I love the wings! I like the word wee. Nice picture and daddy looks so proud! Nice sentimental poem.

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks Melissa for the nice review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Precious precious precious

Beautiful picture beautiful poem

Captures the essence of a new father's happiness and love perfectly

God bless

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks you Jenny for the nice review.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Patricia that should have been entered into a contest I think. That is just so magical and precious and you can't buy that love anywhere mate. You just nade my heart melt. Cheers Fez

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks Fez for the nice review.

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

What a precious, loving photo to accompany your sweet poem. Your artist friend did a great job applying the wings. Thanks for posting this, it started my day in such a calm frame of mind.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks for the nice review. He did do a good job on putting the wings on the photo.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Patricia
A beautiful picture of a loving father and his baby. A well-written short poem to go with it.

Do you mean son in law with your granddaughter?

Mary

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks Mary for the review, no, it is the husband of my granddaughter and my great grand daughter.

reply by Jackarrie on 20-Jan-2015

Ok, I understand now. x

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Beautiful sentiment in your sweet tribute to your great granddaughter. They really are angels aren't they.
Love the picture. Thanks for sharing. Nancy

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks Nancy for the nice review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Such a wonderful picture. Speaks volumes for sure. Love the touch with the angel's wings.

How old is the baby now?

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)


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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks for the review. She is almost 16 months old now. She is growing so fast.

Comment from GracieAnn

Exceptional

pat, this is a sweetly written 5 7 5 with perfect line and syllable count. The words capture the special moment of fatherhood. Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015

Thanks for the review and the six. What a blessing.