Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10021 "Faat Factor"from birth I have longed for death
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Comment from Jacob Collins
Your words speak true, as we grow older we should care more about our health than our looks but unfortunately people these days appear more concerned about the latter. An entertaining piece of writing. I couldn't find any faults...Jacob
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Your words speak true, as we grow older we should care more about our health than our looks but unfortunately people these days appear more concerned about the latter. An entertaining piece of writing. I couldn't find any faults...Jacob
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Brian C. Sloan
I'm confused to what this is exactly, or what it's accomplishing. At first it seems to be a story, but then it goes to a free-flow of thoughts and ideas, as if talking off the top of your head. I understand it's supposed to be satirical, but it's just confusing to me, but maybe it's what you wanted to do, its hard to tell.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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I'm confused to what this is exactly, or what it's accomplishing. At first it seems to be a story, but then it goes to a free-flow of thoughts and ideas, as if talking off the top of your head. I understand it's supposed to be satirical, but it's just confusing to me, but maybe it's what you wanted to do, its hard to tell.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Truthfully, I am not sure.