To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "First Kiss, Last Kiss"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from fimarie78
I really like this. The images were well chosen and the red text on black background worked well. I liked the short, snappy phrases and the way you had repeated phrases but changed the ending in each verse. Good luck in the contest.
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I really like this. The images were well chosen and the red text on black background worked well. I liked the short, snappy phrases and the way you had repeated phrases but changed the ending in each verse. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
Comment from TAB_that's me
this is interesting and unique. i like the two different parts to this. I wish you the best in the contest.
~~teresa~~
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this is interesting and unique. i like the two different parts to this. I wish you the best in the contest.
~~teresa~~
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2015