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A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
13 total reviews
Comment from
victor 66
That's really how it works! Before children, a young married couple know everything about kids. After the birth of their first child, they don't know jack didily. This is a good entry for this contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
thank you Victor, I appreciate your comments and review
reply by victor 66 on 01-Jun-2015
You are most welcome, Gypsy Blue Rose.
Comment from
giraffmang
Hi there,
This is pretty funny with a great accompanying picture that seals the deal!
I kept thinking though should it be worst rather than worse though. At your discretion, of course.
GMG
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
Thank you for the 5 stars and the comments. I will change that, you are right.
Comment from
TAB_that's me
I still wish children (adult children) hat instructions with them - it would be so much easier - lol. Good entry and good luck.
teresa
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Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
thank you Teresa, I appreciate the 5 stars and your comments.
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