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2015 Haiku

Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Worst Parents Ever"
A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015

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Comment from victor 66
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That's really how it works! Before children, a young married couple know everything about kids. After the birth of their first child, they don't know jack didily. This is a good entry for this contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015


reply by the author on 27-May-2015
    thank you Victor, I appreciate your comments and review
reply by victor 66 on 01-Jun-2015
    You are most welcome, Gypsy Blue Rose.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

This is pretty funny with a great accompanying picture that seals the deal!

I kept thinking though should it be worst rather than worse though. At your discretion, of course.

GMG

 Comment Written 27-May-2015


reply by the author on 27-May-2015
    Thank you for the 5 stars and the comments. I will change that, you are right.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I still wish children (adult children) hat instructions with them - it would be so much easier - lol. Good entry and good luck.
teresa

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 Comment Written 27-May-2015


reply by the author on 27-May-2015
    thank you Teresa, I appreciate the 5 stars and your comments.