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Letter to Adewpearl/Brooke

A short story, letter and diary.

21 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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I was delighted to see Brooke's name pop up on my screen today and was pleased to hear that Miranda is reading our poems and responses to her as they make their way across the country. I do not have her email or contact information, but I'm sure that will follow when they reach California. I think I mentioned to you that my mother was diagnosed late in life with MS, but she lived with the disease for nearly 25 years and maintained a significant quality of life. I second your wishes for Brooke and her family- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. That sounds good.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

You have written a nice note to Brooke and her daughter. It sounds like Brooke is getting better and will be living closer to her daughter again. That will be nice for both of them.

Kat

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
reply by MizKat on 23-Jul-2015
    You're welcome! Hope you'll have the great rest of this week too.
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Ine
I am happy to hear that Brooke is going to be with her family in California. Hopefully she will recover and return for some interaction here on Fanstory. she is missed so much

Mary

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I wish I could help but I have no other contact for her than FB or here - I know they've begun their road trip though, so reaching her by telephone probably isn't possible unless you have a cell phone number.

One tiny nit - "another" is all one word - third paragraph.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week. Thanks.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I know that Brooke and her lovely family are in all of our prayers, Ine. And continued prayers for her full recovery can't hurt either, even though she is doing much better. I will continue to keep Brooke in my prayers, even after I know for sure she's doing okay. I'm sure you feel much the same way.

As far as Miranda's email address, I don't know it myself. Sorry I couldn't help you out there.

~Dean

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.
reply by Dean Kuch on 22-Jul-2015
    yep, u 2
Comment from Curly Girly
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It is good to hear that Brooke is still alive and coping.
California sounds like a warm place, so hopefully she will be happier there. And I hope it is closer to her family.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.
Comment from c_lucas
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Brooke has the fighting spirit. I look for her to defeat this set back. California will be good for her and being close to family is an added bonus. Sawyer will keep her on her toes.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.
reply by c_lucas on 23-Jul-2015
    You're welcome
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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I was so thrilled to see her name pop up in my box. I sent back a message immediately and let them know I was praying for a safe trip, travelling mercies and green lights all the way

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.
Comment from judiverse
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Glad you have heard something. It will surely help Brooke if she can be close to her family. I hope she can at least improve to the extent that she can write and read what others are writing. That would give her purpose once again. Glad to have some word on what her plans are. She'll be thrilled to get to see Miranda and Sawyer often. judi

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.
Comment from pharp
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Thanks for the up-date on Brooke as so many of us are concern about health and wishes her a speedy recovery.. We will continue to keep her in our prayers and thank you for being such a loyal friend to her. Blessings.......Portia

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely second part of the week.