2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "senryu (the best war movie)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Glasstruth
R or X rated movies just for the sake of it never makes for a good movie. It's the actors, the plot, and how it's all put together. For 17 syllables this shows a lot of creativity. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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R or X rated movies just for the sake of it never makes for a good movie. It's the actors, the plot, and how it's all put together. For 17 syllables this shows a lot of creativity. Well done! Les
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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thank you Les :)
Comment from Chunger
Creative poem. Also iconic in that it works great for this short of a poem. Good luck in the contest. This is a fun one!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Creative poem. Also iconic in that it works great for this short of a poem. Good luck in the contest. This is a fun one!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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thank you chunger :)
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I do agree that is was a good movie. I'm not so sure it would be classified as a war movie, at least not the first part alone. But this is a solid review, and we know you liked it.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Hmm, I do agree that is was a good movie. I'm not so sure it would be classified as a war movie, at least not the first part alone. But this is a solid review, and we know you liked it.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you lancellot :)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Not normally classed as a war movie but this interpretation is spot on. That's exactly what all of the movies are. Interesting perspective and well constructed within the format.
Clever
GMG
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Hi there,
Not normally classed as a war movie but this interpretation is spot on. That's exactly what all of the movies are. Interesting perspective and well constructed within the format.
Clever
GMG
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you giraffmang :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
I am not familiar with the movie but you have a good 5-7-5 and a good critique in the few available syllables. Good luck to you.
Teresa
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I am not familiar with the movie but you have a good 5-7-5 and a good critique in the few available syllables. Good luck to you.
Teresa
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you Teresa. :)