Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Eau De Toilette"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
16 total reviews
Comment from poetadeu
You have definitely met the strict rules for
the ode contest. Rhythm, rhyme and meter
perfecto and I love the humor you have
injected here and there. Who can give this
friend to Good Will? Nah, my heart's not that big.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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You have definitely met the strict rules for
the ode contest. Rhythm, rhyme and meter
perfecto and I love the humor you have
injected here and there. Who can give this
friend to Good Will? Nah, my heart's not that big.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece. Appreciate your comments and support.
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Oh, it's entirely my pleasure::}Joyce
Comment from Sis Cat
Laughter is a good reason to write and enjoy poetry. This is quite a delightful contest entry and play on words eau de toilette. This is zany, direct, and fun. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Laughter is a good reason to write and enjoy poetry. This is quite a delightful contest entry and play on words eau de toilette. This is zany, direct, and fun. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. I must say this is quite a unique approach yet the toilet is a very deserving item since bushes do scratch. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly. I must say this is quite a unique approach yet the toilet is a very deserving item since bushes do scratch. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Glasstruth
Great picture. LOL. Almost sounds like a love poem for a toilet. The personification here is truly brilliant. Maybe this should be in a public toilet to read. Where else? Also would make for a great poem to recite. Wonderfully written. Les
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Great picture. LOL. Almost sounds like a love poem for a toilet. The personification here is truly brilliant. Maybe this should be in a public toilet to read. Where else? Also would make for a great poem to recite. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Glad you could appreciate my little attempt at some humor.
Comment from indigloaura
If you wrote this for laughter, you accomplished your goal. Very light and funny. I don't think I will ever look at my toilet the same way again!
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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If you wrote this for laughter, you accomplished your goal. Very light and funny. I don't think I will ever look at my toilet the same way again!
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Glad you could laugh at this. Yes, I wrote it simply for the fun of it. Appreciate your comments and support very much indeed.
Comment from rspoet
Well, this is fun
as long as you don't have to take the plunge
for the plunge
is no fun at all
A "free flowing" poem
that rhymes nicely
Not much into "hugs"
but that gurgling sound
of water going down
is sometimes
music to my ears
Well done, good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Well, this is fun
as long as you don't have to take the plunge
for the plunge
is no fun at all
A "free flowing" poem
that rhymes nicely
Not much into "hugs"
but that gurgling sound
of water going down
is sometimes
music to my ears
Well done, good luck in the contest
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little bit of silliness. Appreciate your comments and support very much indeed.