Dr. Howler's Nightmares
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Pole Dancer"A collection of most unusual bedtime stories
15 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
You have once again written an interesting story. So they turned the man into a wolf. Is there going to be more of this or will you write something different next time. I always enjoy reading your work . . . most of it anyway.
Kat
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Hi Brett,
You have once again written an interesting story. So they turned the man into a wolf. Is there going to be more of this or will you write something different next time. I always enjoy reading your work . . . most of it anyway.
Kat
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Never know what may lurking within this pen of mine. Glad you enjoyed this little story.
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I also like your stories.
Comment from PEGLEGDAN
I found this story to be one that would someday soon make a movie, or T V show.
As I am new to fanstory, I feel that my comments may not meat to much, but it did seem to be a well written story, with a lot of action to it, and that is why I feel it would make a fine movie.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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I found this story to be one that would someday soon make a movie, or T V show.
As I am new to fanstory, I feel that my comments may not meat to much, but it did seem to be a well written story, with a lot of action to it, and that is why I feel it would make a fine movie.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Welcome to FanStory. Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Will let Doctor Howler know.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, brett, you did an excellent job writing this story about the man who got his prey but became one himself. I enjoyed reading it. shouldn't it be raven black long hair instead of raven long black hair?
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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this is an excellent write, brett, you did an excellent job writing this story about the man who got his prey but became one himself. I enjoyed reading it. shouldn't it be raven black long hair instead of raven long black hair?
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Will let Doctor Howler know you enjoyed his little tale.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH so wonderfully written and one of my favorite mystical themes.
Nicely done. Easy to read and understand.
Goose bumps and all were worth it.
No problems noted and a great read
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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OH so wonderfully written and one of my favorite mystical themes.
Nicely done. Easy to read and understand.
Goose bumps and all were worth it.
No problems noted and a great read
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Really di appreciate them indeed.
Comment from mfowler
I thought this narrative was going to end predictably as the cop's internal conversation pointed at the conclusion from the beginning. Yet, you got me. I hardly expected that great ending. He becomes the were-wolf when it turns out that there's way more than the fine bitch he's dispatched. The story has a seedy 'noir' atmosphere as you build the case for why he needs to kill the woman on the pole. The back story is clear and the reason for the kill well evolved. Congratulations on a good horror story with a kick.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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I thought this narrative was going to end predictably as the cop's internal conversation pointed at the conclusion from the beginning. Yet, you got me. I hardly expected that great ending. He becomes the were-wolf when it turns out that there's way more than the fine bitch he's dispatched. The story has a seedy 'noir' atmosphere as you build the case for why he needs to kill the woman on the pole. The back story is clear and the reason for the kill well evolved. Congratulations on a good horror story with a kick.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much for your review. Glad you enjoyed it. I will let Doctor Howler know your sentiments about this one.
