2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "5/7/5 ( Bare Dry Land Dreams Of )"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Droughts that dry out the land, and allow no crops to grow, are a major concern for many people. Well written poem that should also be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Droughts that dry out the land, and allow no crops to grow, are a major concern for many people. Well written poem that should also be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thank you Brett :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
Golden is the new green in some areas. We have plenty of rain and the grass is greener and lusher than I can ever remember in July/August. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Golden is the new green in some areas. We have plenty of rain and the grass is greener and lusher than I can ever remember in July/August. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
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Thank you Teresa :)
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an apt Nature 5-7-5 poem, very well presented. It's as though the land has forgotten what green grass even looks like and has settled for golden. Syllable counts are correct. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
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This is an apt Nature 5-7-5 poem, very well presented. It's as though the land has forgotten what green grass even looks like and has settled for golden. Syllable counts are correct. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
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Thank you Jeanie :)