2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Senryu ( I'm happy to know )"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a clever senryu, and it meets the criteria of this prompt as to form and syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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This is a clever senryu, and it meets the criteria of this prompt as to form and syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thank you Jeanie :)
Comment from DragonSkulls
The only one of the bunch, in my opinion, that actually qualifies as a senryu. Thank you for the chuckle. I wish you the best of luck with this excellent entry.
DS
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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The only one of the bunch, in my opinion, that actually qualifies as a senryu. Thank you for the chuckle. I wish you the best of luck with this excellent entry.
DS
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thank you DS :)
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You're quite welcome. I actually liked it better the way you had it before the change. The pic and the words, rather than just limiting it to 'Visa.' But that's just me, lol.
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I kept getting links to credit cards in my font, I liked the first pic too but I didn't want the links in my poem.
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Oh, I see. Yeah, that's not good.