Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Don't Lie"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
27 total reviews
Comment from Taffspride
The sentiments you present in your poem are so deep and sincere. How many of us would love to hear that said?
When read aloud this sounds so beautiful. Some lucky person will be yours for sure.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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The sentiments you present in your poem are so deep and sincere. How many of us would love to hear that said?
When read aloud this sounds so beautiful. Some lucky person will be yours for sure.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Appreciate your comments an support. Actually I am the lucky one.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
What a wonderful claim. This is a revealing poem. Everybody can easily relate to this poem. Talking like a woman of good virtues, you have counselled the men fold with this poem. You have again revealed what makes a woman stay permanently in love: "A woman lives for loving
Every single day
Little things you do for her
Make a woman stay." Nicely thought out.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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What a wonderful claim. This is a revealing poem. Everybody can easily relate to this poem. Talking like a woman of good virtues, you have counselled the men fold with this poem. You have again revealed what makes a woman stay permanently in love: "A woman lives for loving
Every single day
Little things you do for her
Make a woman stay." Nicely thought out.
ola thomas
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Lesley Collier
A wonderful poem about everlasting love and the great appreciation that comes with it. That you must nurture this love to keep it going and enjoy every moment of the beauty of knowing your love is sincere and ever growing. Honesty and truth are entwined to ensure the love never dims but basks in the light of God's eternal blessing.Well written and a lesson to be learned for those of you that truly treasure your woman!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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A wonderful poem about everlasting love and the great appreciation that comes with it. That you must nurture this love to keep it going and enjoy every moment of the beauty of knowing your love is sincere and ever growing. Honesty and truth are entwined to ensure the love never dims but basks in the light of God's eternal blessing.Well written and a lesson to be learned for those of you that truly treasure your woman!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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And I do treasure mine. Glad you enjoyed this one. Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brett, this a wonderful well written love poem, you have used description and imagery to it's maximum, great rhyme and proximate rhyme, wonderful rhythm and a great flow.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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Hi Brett, this a wonderful well written love poem, you have used description and imagery to it's maximum, great rhyme and proximate rhyme, wonderful rhythm and a great flow.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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Thanks as always. Appreciate it very much.
Comment from judiverse
Great. A guy who has found what many others can only wonder at. Being honest is so important. That's good thinking--the little things you do can make a woman stay. It seems that the narrator has learned from past experience, so he knows what he's talking about. Excellent rhyme and flow. Projects a lot of feeling. judi
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Great. A guy who has found what many others can only wonder at. Being honest is so important. That's good thinking--the little things you do can make a woman stay. It seems that the narrator has learned from past experience, so he knows what he's talking about. Excellent rhyme and flow. Projects a lot of feeling. judi
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comments.
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You're very welcome. Happy trails. judi
Comment from I am Cat
Agreed.
Don't lie.
And if you don't, you won't have to bury anything.
We sometimes learn these things the hard way...
but if you're lucky, you can back up...
apologize, and start over again...
and not do it again
I appreciate and truly love the sentiments stated
in your poem.
It is nice to hear that truth prevails.
Well done Brett... I loved it.
Cat
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Agreed.
Don't lie.
And if you don't, you won't have to bury anything.
We sometimes learn these things the hard way...
but if you're lucky, you can back up...
apologize, and start over again...
and not do it again
I appreciate and truly love the sentiments stated
in your poem.
It is nice to hear that truth prevails.
Well done Brett... I loved it.
Cat
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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truth always should prevail in a relationship. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This is a nice little poem. I really love the rose to although my favorite color of them is burgundy. You are so talented I'm always amazed and the many different things you write and how good all of them are.
Kat
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Hi Brett,
This is a nice little poem. I really love the rose to although my favorite color of them is burgundy. You are so talented I'm always amazed and the many different things you write and how good all of them are.
Kat
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Always appreciate your comments and support.
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Thanks for appreciating my comments and support. I love reading your work.
Comment from Serendipity!
I'm glad you found this kind of relationship and hope it goes on and on forever. My husband is like that, also: so appreciative, always so caring. I don't know how many times he has asked "is there anything I can help you with" and he has also stopped remarking when I make something he doesn't like, and we have been married for over forty years! Maybe I should polish up on my own loving skills. :)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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I'm glad you found this kind of relationship and hope it goes on and on forever. My husband is like that, also: so appreciative, always so caring. I don't know how many times he has asked "is there anything I can help you with" and he has also stopped remarking when I make something he doesn't like, and we have been married for over forty years! Maybe I should polish up on my own loving skills. :)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Truth is always most important in a strong relationship. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You are absolutely right Brett. It works both ways too ladies. Do little things for your guy. Don't lie and don't take love for granted. That is the biggest pitfall. Keep the romance alive. Love your poem. Great advice. :<) Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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You are absolutely right Brett. It works both ways too ladies. Do little things for your guy. Don't lie and don't take love for granted. That is the biggest pitfall. Keep the romance alive. Love your poem. Great advice. :<) Nancy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Truth in a relationship is so important. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from MelB
If every married man could read this poem and understand it, there would be a lot more happy marriages out there! Well done, Brett!
A woman lives for loving
Every single day
Little things you do for her
Make a woman stay - summed up wonderfully in one stanza
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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If every married man could read this poem and understand it, there would be a lot more happy marriages out there! Well done, Brett!
A woman lives for loving
Every single day
Little things you do for her
Make a woman stay - summed up wonderfully in one stanza
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. Always appreciate your comments and support.