Short Form Poetry
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Comment from Neonewman
This wonderfully crafted pieces caresses the sense of smell. I closed my eyes in imagination and reveled in its cause.
Great job with this entry my friend, good luck!
God bless!
Steve
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This wonderfully crafted pieces caresses the sense of smell. I closed my eyes in imagination and reveled in its cause.
Great job with this entry my friend, good luck!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
Comment from zanya
Amazing what poetic feats and heights can be achieved even with a minimum of words as illustrated beautifully here - and appealing to a range of senses- I can almost smell that 'scent' at this remove !
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Amazing what poetic feats and heights can be achieved even with a minimum of words as illustrated beautifully here - and appealing to a range of senses- I can almost smell that 'scent' at this remove !
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. You do say a lot with just one line. I think this was creative. I like how you show us the pie and also give us an idea of the time of year. All that and also a visual image. Great job.
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Wow. You do say a lot with just one line. I think this was creative. I like how you show us the pie and also give us an idea of the time of year. All that and also a visual image. Great job.
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2015