Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Even The Roses Are Crying"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from angelface2
Wow, Brett. I think this is lovely. Did you write music for this? Or is it just a poem. Good job. Love the picture. I love roses anyway, my favorite flower. The rhythm is rather strange, though I know sometimes music is different. I hope I am making sense. Blessings, Miss Sally
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Wow, Brett. I think this is lovely. Did you write music for this? Or is it just a poem. Good job. Love the picture. I love roses anyway, my favorite flower. The rhythm is rather strange, though I know sometimes music is different. I hope I am making sense. Blessings, Miss Sally
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful write, brett, you did an excellent job writing these lyrics about a love gone wrong, great imagery presented that brings the emotion forth to the reader.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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this is a beautiful write, brett, you did an excellent job writing these lyrics about a love gone wrong, great imagery presented that brings the emotion forth to the reader.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I'm sure there are lost loves and roses crying all over the world tonight.
An interesting expression of lost love and the emotional toll it takes.
Sadly lovers so often don't see what they had until it is gone.
Well expressed and presented.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I'm sure there are lost loves and roses crying all over the world tonight.
An interesting expression of lost love and the emotional toll it takes.
Sadly lovers so often don't see what they had until it is gone.
Well expressed and presented.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
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Comment from judiverse
Great line about even the roses are crying. The narrator feels he's lost his loved one because he took her love for granted. The melancholy overtakes him. He has the phone, but she's said not to call. Maybe he should just call anyway. He should keep on trying. Excellent rhyme, and the wording works well. Happy trails. judi
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Great line about even the roses are crying. The narrator feels he's lost his loved one because he took her love for granted. The melancholy overtakes him. He has the phone, but she's said not to call. Maybe he should just call anyway. He should keep on trying. Excellent rhyme, and the wording works well. Happy trails. judi
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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You're very welcome. Happy trails. judi
Comment from Serendipity!
is all that's left of you and me (Isn't this a little long. How about "all that's left of 'we'?)Than watching good love turn cold (once again 'good' seems to add an extra syllable, but maybe it's just me.)
Focus on the positive, buddy, focus on the positive in your relationships. ; )
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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is all that's left of you and me (Isn't this a little long. How about "all that's left of 'we'?)Than watching good love turn cold (once again 'good' seems to add an extra syllable, but maybe it's just me.)
Focus on the positive, buddy, focus on the positive in your relationships. ; )
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Sad, pitiful, and morbid warms the hear every time, especially when writing Country lyrics, so no need to change that now. Glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from Louise Michelle
You really have this genre down, Brett. I don't actually have a tune in my head when I read your poetry - it's hard to explain. I think it's that I have a country western rhythm.
Then, of course, there's the content. The third stanza is so vivid - by writing 8X10 instead of picture, the image just pops off the screen.
I'm going to fan you because finding your work is hit or miss since I don't spend a lot of time here. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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You really have this genre down, Brett. I don't actually have a tune in my head when I read your poetry - it's hard to explain. I think it's that I have a country western rhythm.
Then, of course, there's the content. The third stanza is so vivid - by writing 8X10 instead of picture, the image just pops off the screen.
I'm going to fan you because finding your work is hit or miss since I don't spend a lot of time here. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Comment from RahulChadha
A very well written poetry and nicely expressed and put into words. A decent vocabulary is used and a different topic is chosen, and it is really romantic.
I would appreciate if you would read my work and give your precious review.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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A very well written poetry and nicely expressed and put into words. A decent vocabulary is used and a different topic is chosen, and it is really romantic.
I would appreciate if you would read my work and give your precious review.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett...
_ Great lyrics.
_ Your're right in your notes---the artwork complements your poem very much.
_ It's true sometimes, no matter what, love dies hard.
_ Enjoyable read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Hi, Brett...
_ Great lyrics.
_ Your're right in your notes---the artwork complements your poem very much.
_ It's true sometimes, no matter what, love dies hard.
_ Enjoyable read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Comment from Chrissy710
a really lovely poem Brett, nicely composed and I could see the heatache all the waythrough. your stanzas flowed well and I loved the lines re the roses crying Well done Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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a really lovely poem Brett, nicely composed and I could see the heatache all the waythrough. your stanzas flowed well and I loved the lines re the roses crying Well done Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
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Comment from Nosha17
Some relationships were not meant to be and however much one cries it will never work out. Well expressed words of feelings and love and good use of rhyming. Most enjoyable read Faye
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Some relationships were not meant to be and however much one cries it will never work out. Well expressed words of feelings and love and good use of rhyming. Most enjoyable read Faye
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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